Hidden_Moon

Hidden_Moon

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2023-05-18 Unido Global
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1 years ago
Replied to jaymo

ty. i am glad you like it

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1 years ago
Replied to Leo_Bassist

yes, will update. I'm just planning his next life.

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1 years ago
Replied to StarParagon

no

[Ding! The host can obtain points by increasing his cultivation level in each reincarnation. The host can also complete certain achievements to gain extra points. The points will be added to the host's account after the host's death in each reincarnation.]

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1 years ago
Replied to Efrinn

idk if u said that bcs he will start a harem, because no, he won't start a harem. he is just joking with her. which part do you think made the mc annoying and a regular character? i want to make the mc more unique, and i want to know how i can improve him.

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1 years ago
Replied to DaoistwOqXyh

alright, i will write it how you said. i wanted to make it funnier. also, mc was sarcastic here. it seems that i didn't make it so obvious. i just wanted this dialogue to be funny

Xiao Ye grinned wickedly as he looked at Yao Xia. He scanned her breasts and her beautiful face and said arrogantly, "You slut! In front of heaven and earth, I swear that I will make you part of my harem."

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Eastern · Hidden_Moon

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1 years ago
Replied to DaoistwOqXyh

not really

For individuals like Xiao Ye, a psychopath, blood relations merely offer a sense of trust, one that others may extend to him.

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1 years ago
Replied to Androfox

I'm glad you liked this part of the novel. Well, the main character will create his own techniques quite often.

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1 years ago
Replied to ReverseHit

did you perhaps like the previous book more?

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1 years ago
Replied to ReverseHit

I don't think I will. I will probably drop that one, since this one seems more promising. I don't like how the first chapter was in this book, but now, I started to enjoy writing this book. As for the other, it will take significantly more effort to write, it is beyond my capability to try to develop Xiao Ye from an average guy to someone cold and ruthless.