Like the above comment said, very nice concept and good try. I don't know why the author put it on hiatus but may be this review will give you some motivation to write, like, there are people waiting to read it 👐
Este livro foi excluído.
It's a great concept with the same villainous undertones like John Kyenes but better. I especially like the on hook system in this novel. Let's start another wonderful novel.
As of now, it's the best detective novel on the site where the protagonist actually uses his brain to solve the case instead of some divine hint by system and the cases too are anything but easy. Neither are there any godly techniques used by some common people like in detective Conan. The character building is good too, from confused and rigid at start to lively, cautious, calculative and detective-like.
I like your other books, so giving it a try. To be honest, I never read Mahabharat Or Gita but I have heard of it. Giving it a try for your sake. 😇 But I like the premise from the starting chapters. 😌
Reincarnated In Mahabharat with Seven Deadly Sins System
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