the story is going at a good rate. character development is at a good place for the main characters, and i feel the other characters could do with more light in the story and for world building could/can be told more on, but other than that I feel it's in a good place. keep up the good work.
the story is going at a good rate. character development is at a good place for the main characters, and i feel the other characters could do with more light in the story and for world building could/can be told more on, but other than that I feel it's in a good place. keep up the good work.
The Supervillain Transmigrated Into a Runt to Avoid Resurrection
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor