Yukiii123

Yukiii123

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Yuki, 20years, love creating novel.

2023-04-04 Unido Global
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Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Replied to GifflarGod

Thank you again for your feedback and concern regarding the use of the phrase "forever in debt" in my writing. While I understand that the character may not truly be indebted to the old man, I wanted to convey the depth of his appreciation and gratitude towards the old man through this phrase. It was meant to be a way for the character to express his feelings in words, and I believed it captured the emotions accurately. However, I appreciate your feedback and will certainly consider your thoughts in my future writing. Thank you again for your support and constructive criticism.

"Thank you," Wu Hao said, bowing respectfully to the old man. "I am forever in your debt."

Rise of the Martial King

Rise of the Martial King

Fantasy · Yukiii123

Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Replied to GifflarGod

You are correct. I apologize for the lack of logic in this chapter, particularly for allowing the character to rest in an unsafe place. It was my negligence that led to this oversight. In the future, I will take extra care to ensure that each chapter is carefully arranged and logically sound. Thank you for your feedback, and I appreciate your understanding.

After finishing his meal, Wu Hao decided to rest for the night. He found a comfortable spot next to the fire and settled down, feeling the warmth of the fire on his skin. He closed his eyes and let his mind drift, feeling a sense of calm and relaxation wash over him.

Rise of the Martial King

Rise of the Martial King

Fantasy · Yukiii123

Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Replied to GifflarGod

Again thank you for your question about the phrase "forever in your debt" in Wu Hao's story. In this context, the phrase means that Wu Hao is deeply grateful to the old man for his kindness and assistance, and feels that he owes him a debt that he can never fully repay. It is a way of expressing gratitude for a significant act of kindness or assistance that has made a lasting impact. Wu Hao's encounter with the old man and his offer of help reflects the importance of generosity and kindness in our lives. It also highlights the idea that sometimes we need help from others to achieve our goals, and that it is important to be grateful for that help and to express our appreciation. As an author, I strive to create characters and situations that reflect the complexity of human experience and the power of human connection. I hope that by reading Wu Hao's story, you are inspired to think about the importance of gratitude, kindness, and generosity in your own life. Thank you for your interest in my work, and I hope you continue to enjoy Wu Hao's adventures.

"Thank you," Wu Hao said, bowing respectfully to the old man. "I am forever in your debt."

Rise of the Martial King

Rise of the Martial King

Fantasy · Yukiii123

Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Replied to GifflarGod

Thank you for your question about Wu Hao's actions in the scene with the wolves. Actually his primary goal was to protect the owner of the small house, and once he had succeeded in driving the wolves away, there was no need for him to continue to fight and harm them. I hope this explanation helps to clarify Wu Hao's actions in the scene. Thank you for your interest in my story.

Finally, the wolf lay still, defeated. The rest of the pack fled into the night, howling in pain and defeat. Wu Hao stood there, panting and sweating, but triumphant. He had saved the owner of the house and proved himself to be a skilled and powerful warrior.

Rise of the Martial King

Rise of the Martial King

Fantasy · Yukiii123

Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Replied to GifflarGod

For this phrase I understand that everyone has different experiences and opinions, but I personally found that phrase to be a nice moment of relaxation for the character. After facing many challenges and obstacles on his journey, it was nice to see Wu Hao find a moment of peace and relaxation before continuing on. However, I understand that not everyone may feel the same way.

After finishing his meal, Wu Hao decided to rest for the night. He found a comfortable spot next to the fire and settled down, feeling the warmth of the fire on his skin. He closed his eyes and let his mind drift, feeling a sense of calm and relaxation wash over him.

Rise of the Martial King

Rise of the Martial King

Fantasy · Yukiii123

Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Replied to GifflarGod

Hi, Thank you for your suggestion. I appreciate your feedback and am committed to improving my grammar. I will make every effort to correct my mistakes and consider engaging an editor to assist me in this process. Once again, I appreciate your assistance in correcting my error.

Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Replied to AtrisTheAngel

«Привет, спасибо за ваш отзыв. На самом деле, я начал писать этот фанфик с помощью ChatGPT в свободное время и разместил его для развлечения. Не ожидал, что у него будет столько просмотров. Положительный отклик на мой фанфик дал мне мотивацию написать солидный роман, используя мои собственные идеи. Я использую ChatGPT только для исправления своей грамматики. Если вам интересно, вы можете проверить это в моем аккаунте. Еще раз спасибо!» Я бы порекомендовал прочитать «Rise of the Martial King», потому что я потратил бы большую часть своего времени здесь, чтобы написать его.

Yukiii123
Yukiii123
1 years ago
Posted

Interesting story with A good looking plot.

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