I agree with you, I really do. But I’m also looking at it from his perspective, he a person from our world and he still doesn’t know how to eat nicely. Then there’s the fact the only reason he’s there was to tell them about the spirit fox, and even then they should of just taken him to the chief and then be done with , you could of had a whole little arc about cait sneaking out to see him or somthing.
'What the actual fuck?' Orion thought, utterly bewildered. He struggled to keep his reaction in check with a neutral, understanding nod but couldn't stop a few involuntary twitches.
Arcane Anew
Video Games · Drunken_Sailor822
A bit disappointed that you don’t re read your chapter to see if you need to fix stuff. And even then you dont go and edit the chapter afterwards to fix the problem people point out.
Why? Just teleport?
So I got up and walked toward the elevator to Heaven's Library when I got there I mumbled a small "damn"
DXD: Queen of Angels
Anime & Comics · Stevenking666
Need to fix this paragraph, it not in the same perspective. It sounds like someone else and not our mc
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DXD: Queen of Angels
Anime & Comics · Stevenking666
Quotation mark fix.
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DXD: Queen of Angels
Anime & Comics · Stevenking666
We’d to fix the quotation marks again.
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DXD: Queen of Angels
Anime & Comics · Stevenking666
They are not devil kings? I’m pretty sure that role is Zekram Bael? Sirzechs, Serafall, Ajuka & Falbium are known as Satans no devil kings.
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DXD: Queen of Angels
Anime & Comics · Stevenking666
Need to add a quotation mark here as well. You really should read though it before posting and fix it up.
"This changes everything," said Thomas Kane, Nations alike will scramble to reassess their alliances. The Vatican has instantly become the most powerful political entity in the world, and it's only a matter of time before world leaders demand clarification on how this affects global stability."
DXD: Queen of Angels
Anime & Comics · Stevenking666
Just don’t go there anymore, your not obligated to be there. The only reason I see you are there is to be with the main cast.
'What the actual fuck?' Orion thought, utterly bewildered. He struggled to keep his reaction in check with a neutral, understanding nod but couldn't stop a few involuntary twitches.
Arcane Anew
Video Games · Drunken_Sailor822
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original Earth's Tarnished
The Elden Ring has been shattered, and the Lands Between has fallen into disarray. Many Demigods vie to become Elden Lord, and Tarnished have returned by the call of Grace to challenge them. But there is one Tarnished of no renown who is called, who is not of this world he finds himself in. His name is Lance, he hails from the land of Missouri, and he is in way over his head. Author: Corroded Vortex40 Chs 777 Coleções
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Naruto: Look to the Stars
A Naruto Cthulhu Mythos crossover. To me such a crossover just makes sense. Both Naruto and the Cthulhu mythos have the strange cancerous ability to meld with every single body of fiction ever made ever. Seriously it is astounding that there is so few. Or sure you see a few Naruto fics with Cthulhu Mythos elements but never is it the focus. Either way the story is a simple one, Naruto finds the Necronomicon and everything else just kind of happens as a result of that. Disclaimer: I am saying this only once I do not own Naruto. As for the Cthulhu Mythos well some elements are in the public domain so technically I do own a bit of it. Author: Beastrider9110 Chs 563 Coleções
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The Devil of the Sea
Concluído
When an ordinary man drowns in the depths of the ocean, he expects nothing but darkness and oblivion. Instead, he awakens in a new world—reincarnated as Davy Jones, the legendary captain of the Flying Dutchman. But this is not the world he remembers. It is the treacherous seas of the Grand Line, where pirates wield unimaginable powers and the most dangerous men and women vie for the title of Pirate King. Armed with the fearsome abilities of Davy Jones, he sets sail into the unknown, determined to carve out his own empire. But as his legend grows, so too does the danger. The Yonko, the World Government, and even the sea itself conspire against him. In a world where power is everything, Davy Jones must navigate betrayal, warfare, and the curse that binds him to the ocean. As he battles notorious pirates, forms uneasy alliances, and confronts the mightiest forces in the world, Davy Jones discovers that even the Devil of the Sea is not invincible. Will he rise to become the most feared pirate in history, or will the seas claim him once more? Set sail on an epic adventure in the world of One Piece, where a man reborn as Davy Jones must forge his destiny—or be consumed by it. ________________________________________________________________ I do not own 'One piece' or 'pirates of the Caribbean' they are owned by there respective companies. Please don't sue me, I'm poor.33 Chs 1k Coleções
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Fall for the Void
Izuku Midoriya could never be a pro-hero. He neither had the skills nor the quirk to do so. What he did have was heart though and while it may not do much, a good heart, compassion, and empathy, can all help soothe the pain and hatred engraved in a person. At least, that's what happened when he found himself as the host to the Herrscher of the Void. Author: RushAlias32 Chs 263 Coleções
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Biomass Effect
All life on Earth had been consumed by Blacklight. With no Biomass to feed on, Blacklight had to evolve, adapt, and grow. Now a collective Council of Aliens discovers the existence of such a life form. How do the aliens see a form of life that is viral, how they deal with it, what are the consequences to the galaxy of such a race existing at all. Disclaimer: I own neither Prototype nor Mass Effect. If I did Mercer would not have been stereotypically evil in Prototype 2, and the Mass Effect 3 ending would have gone very differently. Author: Beastrider964 Chs 783 Coleções
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Son of the Weaver
The children of Athena are expected to fear spiders and obtain knowledge of buildings, but Naruto breaks this mold and shows the world what weaving can really do. I don't own the characters from the original story (Naruto or Percy Jackson). Arthur: Infernofox0131 Chs 202 Coleções
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Deleted this as i was struggling to find motivation for it, ill look at it again when i think i can do it and not be pressured with college.0 Chs 96 Coleções
Somthing like this?
The most efficient design was a tiny dish, almost like a stereotypical alien spaceship. It consisted of magnetic rotating rings circling a central core that had the hex gem covered by a mechanism that would allow it to shoot lasers omnidirectionally. If it shot multiple lasers, however, they would be far less powerful than normal. The best part about the design was how flexible it was. It was perhaps 15 cm across, and could turn on a dime. The rotating rings could alter their position and thus practically instantly change the velocity and direction of the disk. The edges were reinforced. They weren't particularly sharp, but they could easily tear through someone's throat. Despite that, this drone was made mainly for sneak attacks and rapid movement. If it went in to cut manually, that increased the chance of it being stopped somehow.
Arcane: Reincarnated as Powder/Jinx
TV · Daoist_windfall_69