RyenMC

RyenMC

male LV 2

I would like to receive constructive feedback, power stones, and reviews to improve my writing. As a humble novice writer, I greatly appreciate any assistance I can get.

2023-03-06 Unido Colombia
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RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Replied to Mangaelf1997

Bete belonged to the Vardis family before joining the Loki family, but many members of the Vardis family died on an expedition to the dungeon while Bete was elsewhere. After that, he joined the Loki family on the recommendation of his God, who left Orario with the rest of the family except for Bete, who decided to stay.

The sun was just peeking over the horizon as Seri and I made our way to the home of the Vardis familia. We arrived at a modest stone building with the Vardis symbol carved into the door. I took a deep breath and knocked. After a few moments that felt like an eternity, the door opened, revealing a tall, muscular man with silver hair, wolf ears, and sharp eyes.

Is It Wrong for a Pallum to Seek Thrills in a Dungeon? (Danmachi)

Is It Wrong for a Pallum to Seek Thrills in a Dungeon? (Danmachi)

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RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Replied to bobuchiha

He is not naive, he just has a rather childish personality. He was only 14 years old before he died and liked to spend most of his time locked up in his house reading, playing video games, or watching anime when he wasn't studying at school, because the neighborhood he lived in was dangerous, with gang members who would often confront each other or chase each other with machetes, resulting in at least one person dying quite close to where he lived each year. Therefore, he is not unfamiliar with the bad nature of humans and knows how to deal with it accordingly, but he still tries to enjoy many of the things he considers fun. By the way, sorry for not having answered this message before. Usually, I only stay on the writing page and, if it's not a main message through a paragraph line or chapter comments, I rarely notice when someone uses a comment to respond to me.

RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Commented

I just realized there was a spelling mistake in the title and on the book cover! Instead of Pallum, it said Pillum. How on earth did no one tell me this before?! I feel like an idiot xD

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RyenMC
RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Replied to KuramaUchiha

I don't even know you xD, but joking aside, I don't use Discord and much less English to have read about that idea. I also don't go on social media pages, and my only hobby is reading manhwas in my original language, which is Spanish. But that aside, I hope you write your fanfic enough so that you can read mine and see that they are not copies and vice versa. I hope things go well for you.

RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Commented

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That monster had a robust body covered in short, rough dark gray fur with black spots on its head. It seemed to have three legs similar to wolves, but the fourth leg at the front was like a monkey's, but with sharp claws like its other legs. Its head was hyena-shaped, with a wide mouth full of sharp teeth.

Founder of the bloodline of eternity

Founder of the bloodline of eternity

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RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Replied to WolfLord

I'm sorry, the automatic translator changed parts of the text to my original language.

RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Replied to Abn0rmal_B1tch

If you're asking whether this is a translation of a Chinese fanfic or something like that, no, it's an original novel, but English is not my primary language.

RyenMC
RyenMC
RyenMC
1 months ago
Commented

Halberd

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Zerlar handed Father the halberd wrapped in cloth. With deliberate movements, Father began to unwrap the cloth, revealing a weapon that took my breath away. The halberd had a majestic appearance, it was of an intense black color, except for the top where the spear point and the larger blade were, which had a reddish hue.

Founder of the bloodline of eternity

Founder of the bloodline of eternity

Video Games · RyenMC