krish_patel

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2023-02-27 Unido Global
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krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Replied to ILovemyself_84

Kind of anti-hero but not edgy he got morals

krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Replied to ILovemyself_84

And no harem

krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Replied to ILovemyself_84

Not much focus on romance for volume one. However it will come later in the story

krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Posted

Hi, Author here. This is my first time writing a novel. It's a dark fantasy Isekai, This story has some familiar Isekai genre elements, but I've added my own unique twists to make it fresh and interesting (not adding the annoying troupes). I would be grateful if you could take a moment to read the prologue and discover what sets my novel apart. If you find it interesting, I am confident that you will enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you for your time!

krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Replied to Ulirec

Thank you! I will keep that in mind

krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Posted

This was a interesting read. Characters: The characters are good, feel three dimensional and real. The mc is great too. Story development: The pace is a bit slow in the start but the interesting worldbuilding make up for it. Writing quality: It is good but there are some grammatical errors such as there is no capital letters at the start of paragraph. A rewrite would fix it. Overall, if you like fantasy with academy elements then you should give it a try. Good luck and keep up the great work.

krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Posted

Amazing! This has the potential to be a great system novel. Characters:The characters are good. Eden is well written and a great mc.He is not too arrogant nor too humble. Side characters are good as well. Writing quality: It is good but there are some tying mistakes. Story development: The pace is amazing, the fast pace will hook you into reading. The worldbuilding is very interesting and unique. The system itself is my favorite part in the story. Overall, if you love system novel with likeable characters, great worldbuilding, and a awesome system then u should give it a try.

krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Commented

Typing mistake here: Ability

krish_patel
krish_patel
krish_patel
1 years ago
Replied to Ninestar619_5803

Thanks!

  • Empire: ashes of the fallen original

    Empire: ashes of the fallen

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC DARK TRANSMIGRATION SURVIVAL ISEKAI LIGHTNOVEL NO-HAREM NOCHEATS

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    Jinzo Watanabe has always felt lost in life, never quite sure of his purpose or what he wants to become. His fellow students and peers all seem to have their paths set, but for Jinzo, the future remains unclear. That is until he dies a gruesome death and is given a second chance at life in another world. From the moment Jinzo opens his eyes in this new world, he can sense the danger that surrounds him. This place is like nothing he's ever experienced before - a twisted, malevolent land that seems to want him dead. As Jinzo adjusts to his new surroundings, he must confront powerful enemies and uncover the secrets of this new world in order to find his true purpose. Will he be able to overcome the challenges ahead, or will he succumb to the darkness that threatens to consume him? The prologue deals with on how the mc got into another world. I'm also going to upload this on Wattpad, Scribble hub, Tapas All rights reserved.

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