NbRust

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2023-02-07 Unido Global
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NbRust
NbRust
39 minutes ago
Posted

I’m confused and lost in this entire story. Author only introduced Mc at the beginning but the story went all over the place when he started with different characters POV which just loses the interest of the story

NbRust
NbRust
1 days ago
Commented

Why do people always think that the low-key route is the safest way??? Being an Uzamaki makes you a walking target so it makes no sense being lowkey. This tactic just delays your increase in strength and fast forwards the inevitable. Novels where Mc is low-key are so lucky that villains are stupid because they won’t even last a month. If you’re hiding strength and your wife doesn’t know only thinking that you’re weak, I’ll be threatening her and Mc be wearing a green hat forever.

'I'll have to watch out for Danzō in Konoha. But as long as I keep a low profile, he shouldn't notice me.'

Naruto: Copy System

Naruto: Copy System

Anime & Comics · DragonnX

NbRust
NbRust
1 days ago
Commented

Use genjutsu

PS: If Shirou were to somehow die, would Mikoto awaken the Mangekyō Sharingan?

Naruto: I am Uchiha Shirou

Naruto: I am Uchiha Shirou

Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode

NbRust
NbRust
2 days ago
Commented

Why do you have a Chinese name when in the summary it’s Noel?

NbRust
NbRust
2 days ago
Commented

What kind of shitty system doesn’t provide the spider bite and forces the host to go and look for the spiders??

NbRust
NbRust
3 days ago
Commented

Good so far but honestly I would prefer Mc killing all those soldiers in his path for revenge rather than leaving them alive. He says that he wants to eliminate them but spares all their lives in confrontation like if he’s teaching them a lesson. Ik you want him to become a hero but there were heroes would killed before joining the league. (Green Arrow)

NbRust
NbRust
3 days ago
Commented

Does she know it ain’t soap?? Cuz aunt may can’t be that innocent

"You were just on a date, go on and try, I'm going up and ordering some pizza" he said and left the room, but then looked in again at the last second, seeing may already starting to undress, "The shower has a button, where the soap you liked so much is mixed in the water, so no soap bottles" he said and finally left the room, just to go into the secret room, watching her shower.

Ultimate Spider-Man System

Ultimate Spider-Man System

Anime & Comics · Sparky20049

NbRust
NbRust
4 days ago
Commented

img

Jiraiya gave Satoru's shoulder a hearty slap, laughing, "Ha! If that were the case, I'd stop you, even if it cost me my life!"

Konoha: The Honored One

Konoha: The Honored One

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Stone

NbRust
NbRust
4 days ago
Commented

Felt a bit cringed reading this chapter: 1. Is the Mc transmigrated? Does he have an existing identity in the world or it was randomly created when he appeared. 2. Though you learned to controlled the power at the end, you should have done it when he first start because that slip up in school came across that like you wanted Mc to be discovered by Scott. 3. Chose teen wolf but it seems like he never watched the show at all. Should have recognized what’s happening and not be so confused. Also what the heck was that in protecting Jennifer when she’s clearly the villain.

NbRust
NbRust
4 days ago
Commented

Him being in the YJ Universe with that caliber of power makes it seems that he’s constricted in using his power. Right off the start you have him labeled as a major multiversal threat who can’t control his power so him being under constant observation isn’t really it. I wouldn’t recommend him being immediately found by the league probably have him escape, living a life of his own while mastering his powers. And since it’s a fresh start no memory from previous life just give him a brief summary of the world he’s in and about the body he’s in so he’ll have an understanding. You can do titans universe and have him join the team in season 2 and at the end of titans if he in a relationship you have probs send them to the YJ universe around season 2.