RyujiSakamata

RyujiSakamata

LV 11
2023-01-24 Unido Japan
Atividade
Obras originais
Emblemas 5

Moments 213
RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
5 months ago
Posted

Truly a captivating story. Your story is far mysterious, which makes me curious. There's this secret organization and inheritance stuff, it will catch the interest of the cultivation reader's interest.

RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
6 months ago
Posted

Great story! Can't wait on how the brothers will manage to escape after the incident. Chap 7 now, it's currently in the running away 'phase.' I'll like to know more what will happen soon.

RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
6 months ago
Commented

img
Este número foi suprimido.
God Of Humanity

God Of Humanity

Fantasy · DreamReaper

RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
6 months ago
Replied to UelUel

Hey cat-eared man, that comment is true

Este número foi suprimido.
God Of Humanity

God Of Humanity

Fantasy · DreamReaper

RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
1 years ago
Replied to AGooseEgg

Updates Every Wed-Thu 8:00 PM GMT+8 Btw, thank you for reading! [img=recommend]

RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
1 years ago
Replied to Reader_Rillas

I'm posting on Royal Road, Scribble Hub, and Honeyfeed as alternatives.

Este livro foi excluído.
RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
1 years ago
Replied to Reader_Rillas

I don't have socials yet, but I'm posting weekly. I'm still focusing on my other story so I can't continue this series yet, but I already plotted half of all character backgrounds.

Este livro foi excluído.
RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
1 years ago
Replied to B4lth

Thank you for being so helpful in hunting down the present tense in my work. You saved much of my time searching for those. By the way, may I ask if you have further readings or articles about the tenses of verbs in creative writing? I would like to study further about proofreading and further improve my and others' work too.

Este livro foi excluído.
RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
1 years ago
Posted

I like the concept of the story, even though there's a huge info dump at the start. I can tell that the author crafter the world background with huge effort. There are some confusing dialogues and grammatical errors, but it can be fixed with re-edit. I hope I could see more of your story since I'm also writing a story about elves. Good job, author!

Este livro foi excluído.
RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamata
1 years ago
Commented

minecraft loading screen flashbacks

Este livro foi excluído.
  • Nebula: Villainess of Never-ending Beyond original

    Nebula: Villainess of Never-ending Beyond

    Fantasy ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC DARK SUPERPOWERS GENIUS ANTIHERO BEAUTY KINGDOMBUILDING LIGHTNOVEL

    Saori Kitagawa, a lethal assassin from another world, wakes up within the body of Quimora, an innocent young girl. The moment she slips into Quimora's being, she inherits her memories and assumes the leadership of a secretive organization, the Veiled Syndicate, dedicated to retrieving the revival stones and killing a certain goddess, the propagator of Entropy. Her frail body restricts her previous life’s skills, which only limits her to clever strategy thinking. Across her journey, she will encounter various conflicting organizations that will hinder the race against the stones. Quimora, who was once a convict, will search her way towards real freedom… which will soon turn into the quest to seek the truth. Saori delves into the world of the unknown, looking for the dearest person she forgot in her life. Writing Style inspirations and the slow-paced drama was based on Asato Asato’s 86-Eight Six. The concept was based on Eminence in Shadow. The lore was based on Honkai: Star Rail. Postings will be Mon-Fri. Chapters depend on whether I don't have mandatory overtimes from work. The cover will be updated depending on the current arc's main character.

    5 Chs 23 Coleções

Usuário de relatório

Comentários
Detalhes da revisão