Beams of light descended like massive lances from the heavens.
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
I always hate when it feels like every female character is there to show how “desirable” the mc is, so I love where you’re going with the crew, and how they each feel like they exist outside of Chris. Also, do have a discord? Or plans for one?
I see, and when he absorbed the magical knowledge, did that destroy the books, or does he still have them?
I’m wonder, during his upgrades, what about all the books he has, because if I remember right, since getting the magic and swordsmanship books, they have been upgraded twice I believe, and the craftsmanship and runes books at least once. Did the knowledge in them before not go up to his current level, and the upgrades bring it there, or is it upgraded in another way?
Also, I totally get it and don’t blame you, I have ADHD as well, and I failed the same college class TWICE in a row, simply because I didn’t do one required training that would have taken like 1 or 2 hours, because I just kept procrastinating and then forgetting about it.
That's why I keep forgetting to get the chapters proofread. Now honestly I don't see this as an excuse and I'm going to rectify this issue soon….hopefully.
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
If you have a discord, you could make a specific channel for proof reading, where your certain members of your community that you grant access to the channel could help, and they would have the added benefit of getting chapters a little earlier. They could also help remind you of stuff by pinging or dming you.
That's why I keep forgetting to get the chapters proofread. Now honestly I don't see this as an excuse and I'm going to rectify this issue soon….hopefully.
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
Are you planning to stick with this, because the synopsis looks good, but I don’t want to waste more money on something that you will stop randomly like your other 2 novels?
While I’m enjoying the chapters, we are spending too much time on side characters for 1 chapter a day, especially since parts of the last 2 chapters are just re explaining the plot slightly differently
Liquid ice… right
She could tell this, she would require a lot of concentration to be able to maintain this shape for a long time using liquid ice.
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Joined right after you updated the chapter
MY 10,000× DIMENSIONAL SYSTEM
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986