It was pretty nice, but i think this sirius should have shown a bit more emotion than this. i mean, the guy was imprisoned for over a decade and betrayed by one of his best friends. I guess you could say he was just shocked or something(which is valid, of course), but i think there should have been a hug scene or smth. The chapter was great as always, I am just nitpicking. tftc 🙏
AN: I decided to throw Sirius a bone. I'm not sure about this being a good enough goodbye between the two, or if I should have made it more emotional, but that didn't seem to suit Harry's personality a bit. I don't really mind rewriting this one if it didn't land like I wanted it to so please let me know if you like it or not and if you have any suggestions for future chapters before the arc ends.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
what do you mean by that?
AN: I think this is our longest chapter yet? But as we all know, its not about the length, its how you use it.
Harry Evans: Memoirs of a well-lived Death (SI)
Book&Literature · Bor902
probably because it would take too much time or effort for it to be worth.. you take some things, and you lose some things.
After Mr. Amano finally managed to convince his daughter that I needed to go, which took him like twenty minutes, we went back to his store where he rang me up for my items. He gave me a discount of 25% off my total, saying it was the family discount, and that if I ever needed anything weapon-related, his doors were open.
Naruto: Faint Smile.
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
6*?
Do remember that due to me numbering these chapters in pattttreon from 0 to above this chapter would be chapter 5 in Patreeeeon.
Naruto: Faint Smile.
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
suuure, his first sin.... we believe you... absolutely..
Uzumaki Naruto would commit his first sin in this world: corrupting an innocent mind.
Sociopathic Ninja
Anime & Comics · Frona_Gorgophone
welcome back, and thanks for the chapter 🙏
i looked it up at Fandom wiki, and it shows "Harry Potter: Magic Caster Wand " as the source. so you might be right. i just think that pestis incendium sounds cooler, tho. imagine chanting just "killing curse."
"Fiendfyre."
The Lion Cub (HP SI)
Book&Literature · Dragonspectre
i think pestis incendium is the chant. like the cruciatus curse' chant is curico.
"Fiendfyre."
The Lion Cub (HP SI)
Book&Literature · Dragonspectre
tftc
tftc
Jujutsu Kaisen: Reborn as Potential Man.
Anime & Comics · HeliosTheDepressed