The book is actually very good. One problem, slow story development, building up thrilling scenes. So far there has only been struggles here and there for resources. One thing I don't like is the MC drinking zbie blood to survive but well, I know development is coming soon, after all, the book just has 40 chapters.Updating stability: Author still owes us a mass release.Writing quality: Easy to understand, story flows well.character design: You guys seriously need to meet the MC.Story development: Slow but steady, not rushing us, no extreme time skip.world background: So the tiran still has some mystery to it and I hope it gets revealed soon. Characters themselves are mysterious at times..Overall a good read. Now all I can do is hope that author gives us our mass release.
That'll be really sad
Sorry, computer corrected me... *So many mistakes.
Keep it up.
You seriously got to reread your chapters... do many mistakes.Anyways, I had a good laugh.
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My handsome imperfect coach
Fantasy · The_author3
I enjoyed it... very much, what a comeback!Hope you can stick to your words and update daily.I'm just curious about Henry's brother.
Name sure you continue it boy...
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original Rewriting (Search:Rebirth of the strongest demon)
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Re written New name: Rebirth of the strongest Demon47 Chs 87 Coleções
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The forbidden fruit: Love in the apocalypse
*paused* Check out my new book'Demon Lord Reborn' ___ Demons demons demons!!! ___________________ Raphael was a normal human in a world where demons and angels are known and famous. During the great war when a gate to hell opened, Raphael was found as a fugitive of war and he didn't have any memories of the time before the war. He never hated anyone...except when a demon hurt someone close to him. He decided to become a demon Hunter. (PS: No yandere here, but good fight scenes and romance) One day, after he became a high ranking demon hunter, his memories of before the war started coming back and he finally knew that he wasn't human. _______________ One day...his friend didn't come back from work and he went to find her only to see her almost dead and a demon towering above her. He saved her from dying but got heavily injured in the process 'If I survive this...I swear I will hunt all demons down' And like that he found himself back again between the war of the races and he had to still Chase his dream. His memories came back piece by piece as he was getting stronger and stronger Notice: Updates paused till 26/7/2023. Important exams...8 Chs 5 Coleções
... Bruh. Still waiting on this. It was good.
Rise Of The Supreme Hybrid Elementalist
Fantasy · PARIS_ONOS