Jad_Assaad

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2022-09-26 Unido Global
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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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Honestly, I’m not too mad about this development. As long as the author takes his time to make sure everything makes sense, this could be a good way to power the MC up. Plus, it’s kind of original, which I enjoy. Usually MC instantly overpowers and overwhelms Danzo, which ehh is getting kinda predictable. I’m excited to see where the author heads with this development. Also, Danzo literally tried to assassinate the Third Hokage like my guy can’t get bolder than that. As for kidnapping an orphan academy student, who’s gonna care? Sure as hell aint gonna be the third hokage, but maybe the clan heads will pressure him. Even then, since the root is “disbanded”, Danzo can just deny all involvement

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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Thank you for the chapter

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
Commented

I like the decision he made here. I didn’t think that he was stretching himself too thin, but focusing on a couple and increasing his combat strength is good too. Smart Mc!

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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Thank you for the chapter!

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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Author’s writing is getting better and better. In the beginning the plot moved a little slow, but it starts picking up speed. MC is smart, calm, and hard working, and also friendly. He’s also realistic and accepts the fact that he’s a shinobi now. All in all, a terrific naruto fanfic to read

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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Thank you for the chapter!! It was really good

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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Thank you for the chapter!

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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Thank you for the chapter

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
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I like the part with Shikamaru and his dad, Shikamaru’s kindness goes unnoticed a lot

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Jad_Assaad
2 years ago
Commented

Nice chapter! I’m glad we’re seeing more interaction with the main characters