well nice work but story changed 7 or 8 time until now at least . well i think still is not bad and good for passing time.
hi thank you for this novel but please dont change your own story too much.i love your story but when rongrog in fallen for mc that much and take it few chapter in next chapter all love became nothing and mc support oscar and rongrong to point destory sect? well i have many idea if you want tell me i can give to you free becuse i read 1000 douluo fanfic and i think i also can create finfic only my problem is fight scene. one question : your mc is wood? his age 13 or 14 ,why he only tease not bite? bunch of beauty no use for your self not ship with some one else?
well i am not fun L chapter but this not bad. i think reason for him to trash talk show up now bc bibidong turtore half of him so eve become M and altair become S and ali is normal bc two opposite null each other when merge into one.
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