i hte cliff hangers!
needed a bit to take it back up after the rewrite but damn i am satisfied! good work and pls don t kill brom anytime soon. (maybe bonding with a second dragon after galbatorix dies…)
sad, but I personally think overpowered fanfics like these get pretty fast very challenging to write as a whole aspect of normal books (poer progression) is pretty much non existent. not to say that i didn t enjoy this fan fic so far! I am also a fan, that there is no harem yet, as those can make or break even the best fics.
sad, hope you will pick this fan fic up again in the future
cliff hanger… nice work though
mean cliff hanger…
yes, finally!!!
did you do sth with this fic? i had it in a list and my recently read and it sadly just vanished, i am pretty lucky to have found it again as i didn t write down the exact title/author….
aint got enough time to research but can invent a new game, kinda fed up in my opinion, i hope it has a deeper meaning in the long run (maybe to sporn wizards to train their bodys? lesrn to fight underwater?)
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original The Ollivanders Secret
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A weird girl in a weird world. Follow Clara Ali Ollivander, as she navigates a world that is so much bigger than anyone would expect. Do not expect regular updates or supreme quality. I only write this story to get it out of my head and it is also my first try at being an author, english being my second language. I still appreciate any constructive feedback, both positive and negative, from anyone who has the time, patience and fun at it. Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or anything associated with it.5 Chs 0 Coleções
The spider queen legendary beast as bonded beast ruined it for me, but still a good book, keep it up
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