Thanks for your comment and I'm sorry for the late reply, Hope you're enjoying the story though.
While he was relieved to see her safe, the sting of rejection hung heavily in the air. He shifted on his feet, grappling with the mixed emotions swirling within him before walking away. As he distanced himself, the conversations of the mercenaries and adventurers drifted into his ears, their voices laced with disdain and hate.
Battle Magus: A Slaves Ascension
Fantasy · TroveMonarch
He's more naive than stupid
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Battle Magus: A Slaves Ascension
Fantasy · TroveMonarch
Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate the honesty. I’ll definitely work on developing the MC more and adding depth to the other characters to avoid clichés. I would appreciate it if you could at least read a little further and give your thoughts there too
I'm all ears
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Thanks, I'll be sure to check it out
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Growing up and living a mundane life, Kaleb wakes up from a nightmare, only to find himself late for work, he rushes out decides to take a shortcut through a narrow alley, only for the ground to collapse beneath him. His life us thrown upside down when he wakes up in a strange bizarre landscape. As he navigates his way through it he stumbles upon a village in ruins, he is then dragged into a cart and left wondering what is happening in the world around him.94 Chs 299 Coleções
Well Shameless Author here. Rating this book 5 stars cause... well cause i can. it's my book after all. If you have any questions just leave a comment. And i hope you enjoy.
Battle Magus: A Slaves Ascension
Fantasy · TroveMonarch