May your rest in piece
if it's what you think is best then go for it. but take the advice another dude said with the rewrite being done in another book so that it's not lost.
in the comics 1 gram is worth $10,000 so this is worth $100,000,000,000,000.
-10 Kilotons worth of Vibranium
In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System
Movies · OneArmedImmortal
wow infinite dimensional, that's pretty large considering the verse they are in.
This is simply a separate infinite dimensional space that can be used by the system's user to store any inorganic or non-living items. The items can be from the System or the outside world.
In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System
Movies · OneArmedImmortal
Yo goated for the shout outs to other series.
I just hoped I wouldn't be yeeted into realities like Warhammer 40K, Dark Souls, SCP Foundation, Marvel, or DC.
In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System
Movies · OneArmedImmortal
Just started reading, seems like a top tier read, the number of power stone was surprisingly low given how good the first chapter was.
i haven't seen an update in a while, the story is good, and worth a read ovver other fanfiction (the slow pace works well with the setting of pre-one piece)
i feel this was kinda a note about the story so far, with how quickly he gains abilities. i think you did a good job showing zoro and brian having larger stats at lower levels to help ballance this, and increasing the required exp works too.
" I shouldn't be greedy. The pace of my improvement is already too fast! So, it's only natural that the condition of leveling up becomes more challenging in order to balance the System!" Austin sighed, but then his mood improved when he remembered the corpses on his Inventory.
One Piece : The Supreme Conqueror System ( Fanfiction )
Anime & Comics · Asbarta
if you wanted to expand on vivi you could give her that ability she used on zoro. also great story keep it up.
was a good story
Martial Arts System
Action · Alekzi