David19687

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2022-08-28 Unido Global
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David19687
David19687
1 days ago
Posted

Pros: good grammer nice story progresion mc is not a god chapter 1 seams to have a new chapter every other day Cons: the mc dont have the powers of mewtwo but can transfor into mewtwo (might be a small thing but I dislike it would rather mc had mewtwos power and can geta boost by transforming)

David19687
David19687
2 days ago
Commented

very mindfull

"It's okay Bella, I'll come find you in a little while." I kissed Bellatrix quickly before she left, my gaze went to Voldemort, he had never stopped looking at me with a smile that became more and more disturbing "Excuse me about that, where were we?" I asked demurely.

Serena Snape: Love of Magic

Serena Snape: Love of Magic

Anime & Comics · Camellya_Addams

David19687
David19687
4 days ago
Posted

Written by AI ...........................................................................................................................................

David19687
David19687
8 days ago
Replied to Kapur_69

According to the us senate its the same thing (Also realy like this ff keep up the good work)

David19687
David19687
8 days ago
Commented

Sounds like somthing a chinese would say

David19687
David19687
1 months ago
Replied to hemant_jain_5191

Yup

David19687
David19687
1 months ago
Commented

Its pretty good

"I never said I was going to eat that. I'm sure their meat is tough. Plus, I've never heard in my life, someone raving about the moose they've eaten." I reply back. 

Overwatch: Rise of Rose

Overwatch: Rise of Rose

Video Games · Eaglestriker_22

David19687
David19687
1 months ago
Commented

in almost all countrys (all that I know) any and all Ideas you have come up with are yours any storyline any caracter you made or even if the caracters was made by someone else if you use them in your story that story the way they acted everything is yours

Sorry if it came as a long rant but I'm still at a loss on how to deal with this properly as I've never thought this would happen to me :(

In Bleach with Choice System

In Bleach with Choice System

Anime & Comics · Ruruch

David19687
David19687
1 months ago
Posted

Pretty good story so far. actualy keeped going after the end of kronos a bit basic just hades with more powers and smarter that we have seen before.

David19687
David19687
1 months ago
Commented

Genjutsu Name: False order Description: Make the target think that they have diffrent orders then what they were given. Example 1: Original order was kill target A New order: kill target B Example 2: Original order was rescue squad A New order: silance squad A so they cant leak intel. think it would be fun and can be used on root agents, anbu of other villages and/or any subordinates. the genjutsu is subtle enough for it to be hard to know that you are in one