BlackGoat

male LV 4
2022-08-28 Unido United States
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Moments 7
BlackGoat
BlackGoat
BlackGoat
1 years ago
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"Vince Parker, Holly Parker, Harley Jorgeson, Stacey Jorgeson, Shane Walsh, and Lori Walsh. Got it? Deal with the problem, and stop following me. I will find you," says the man and hangs up.

Immortal In Supernatural

Immortal In Supernatural

TV · RetMod

BlackGoat
BlackGoat
1 years ago
Commented

I really Like your Story so far, but could you pleas use quote marks while writing the dialog between charakters?

BlackGoat
BlackGoat
1 years ago
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You have my sword and my bow and my axe and my Powerstones

BlackGoat
BlackGoat
1 years ago
Replied to VelvorViper

he is 10 years old atm

"And I'm supposed to believe that? When the whole neighborhood talks about how good Juanito is with his guns and his fists? He'll be a thug, just like you, just like your brothers, just like your father." Mama Welles growled as she yanked Jackie's collar down to get in his face.

In Cyberpunk With Fallout System

In Cyberpunk With Fallout System

Video Games · JManM

BlackGoat
BlackGoat
1 years ago
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You Have My Sword, and My Bow, and My Axe, and My Power Stones

BlackGoat
BlackGoat
2 years ago
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would be Something new to read

I realized that a writing a cyberpunk fanfic is harder than it seems, especially for a webnovel audience, you can't do an oc/si fanfic, cause let's face it, who wants to live in a cyberpunk world? wish-fullfilment? that goes against the entire point of Cyberpunk. In night city, you can't get a happy ending, even if you work with the corpos, you're just surrounded by vultures and hyenas, you're as good as a corpse(haha, get it? cause dudes who's a low-class corpo workers are called corpses?... imma just shut up now...), the entire point of Cyberpunk is that it's a tragedy, no one's happy at the end.

Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

Movies · mark_kiple