Thank you for the advice. I will slowly improve the story and also related to the problem of the story, I have written on my other account and if you want to read it again, please visit a book called Land of Zen. That's the book where the author is Xin. That is me.
Thank you for the input provided. This story itself was built using a bit of Doulou Dalu's foundation, it's just that I've changed a lot of things to avoid plagiarism problems and also I want to earn income from my work. Writing Fanfiction is strictly forbidden to make money, thus, it's impossible for me to do it. Then regarding matters of training or ability, I didn't show it not because I didn't want to. It's just that the story will be boring during the training. This is what caused me not to show the training process that was carried out and only directly showed his abilities.
Romance and not sure harem or not
This is a revision of the previous story and there will be uncertain update issues. Thank You
Uploads. But, not now. At least, until the entire chapter for this work is uploaded here. 150 chapters. This means that you need to wait a while for it to be uploaded to this place. Maybe two months later it will be uploaded.
take my advice. I've considered it. Please check my patreon page again. i have rearranged member issue
it can't be lowered for gold and silver members because someone has already entered there. unless all of them leave the member, it can still be passed down
Audah can't be lowered for gold and silver members because someone has already entered there. unless all of them leave the member, it can still be passed down
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original One Piece : Kingdom Building System
3.92
The Kingdom of Fortis was an empire that had just been established in 1520 in the ocean region of the New World. The Fortis Kingdom has a King who still has a very easy age. However, even though the King is still young, the King has the ability to command, high intelligence, and has a good personality towards others. When these Kingdoms appear to the world. There are many powers that want to dominate this kingdom especially the World Government as well as some of the great pirates residing in the New World. Then? How will the story continue? This story itself is a story that tells of a man who wants to build a comfortable kingdom for him to live in. This man will later be assisted by his friends who will later be summoned by him from various different worlds with a system given to him. The story itself will progress very slowly. So, for anyone who doesn't want to read a story with a slow plot. Please leave it. In addition, regarding the issue of considering the harem or not. Still not determined. I haven't decided yet and want to focus more on developing this story. Final. I'm not good at English. Therefore the English used in this story may be destroyed. I only use google translation to translate my original script which was previously in Indonesian into English. So, there are many words or sentences that are difficult to understand. I hope you can understand. Ok. That's enough of my opening. For those who like my stories please keep them in the library and for those who don't you don't need to read them. Pull the anchor! And read on! Patreon https://www.patreon.com/Arsone Link Khusus Orang Indonesia https://karyakarsa.com/Arsone https://trakteer.id/arsone154 Chs 8.8k Coleções
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One Piece : Dungeon
3.79
The year 1522. In area 13, which is located on the island of Saboundy Archepelago, there is a building that has a sign that reads “Guild” neatly installed in front of the entrance of the building. The guild itself is a place where people who want to register as adventurers, report the missions they have completed in order to get rewards, and also go on adventures in dungeons freely while increasing their strength. In just a few moments of appearance from this place, the Guild began to become something that attracted the attention of various powers. World Government. Navy. Emperor of the Ocean. Revolutionary Army. Pirate. Kingdom. Individual. Each of them carried the hope of being able to conquer the place called the dungeon, especially when they knew the benefits they could get after mastering the place. Then, how does this story continue? For those who like my stories, please keep them in the library, and those who don't like them don't need to read them. Pull the anchor! Patreon.com/Arsone61 Chs 5.6k Coleções
For those who come to read here to find out about the problem of this book review. This story itself has a background that is almost similar to that of Douluo Dalu. It's just that this story has been modified by the author with quite a lot of modifications. I've read a little about it and found that in this story there is a possibility that the main conflict lies in the side characters and not directly referring to the main character. The main character here will play a role to help or have not. He will decide whatever he wants. For those who are interested, maybe you can read it, this story is not bad for spending time.
Land of Zen
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