Pretty great start. I like that Mc doesn't seem to be a dumb guy. First chapters were a little too short for my liking, but like you stated it becomes better. Keep up the good work.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
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thanks for the chapter,but please don't ghost, i really like this story [img=update]
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this story is really great, good writing , I appreciate that you don't rush it , like immediately op mc.. Keep going like that
Thanks for the chapter.
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Thanks for the chapter. Just a question, does Kurama feel when he comes and goes ? Didn't recall reading that ...
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