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I really loved your story and how it developed, it is a good plot. The character development is good and the overall story is also good, keep writing.

So are you saying fill the first chapter with a whole lot of information rather than providing the readers with the feel of the story? This novel is not about that bro, it is about our mc exploring a whole new world, and as we travel with our mc we may get to learn many new things and information as you mentioned. The other thing you mentioned, 'grammar' I guess you have a quite unique concept of it

Hello dear author, I really like the thought that you put into this novel. I also like the world-building you put in. The only thing I would say is that if you can try making it more interesting because I just feel a whole lot of information in your novel.

I really loved the story. This novel has become my new favorite. I really loved how deep the author thought about the emotions and concepts in this novel. I wish to see more updates in the future and all the best.

Thank you

Thank you

Hello dear author I like your writing style and the start of the novel is really great. I like the action sequence in this novel. The only thing I would say to improve is your plot and your long dialogue because sometimes long dialogue scenes interrupt the flow of a scene. Keep doing the great work. Hope for future updates.

Your novel is really amazing and interesting. I really love both main characters and want to know more in the future.

A very great book. Really loved the plot and the development. The characters were also really good, I hope to see more in the future updates, keep developing................................................................................................