When a guy discoveres a parental figure
Why did I trust the guy so much? Well, he acted almost... parental to me?
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
honestly, it would have been better for your fic to post those chapters separately because it would make your chapter count bigger and with that more people would be reading it
C/N: Been writing some chapters throughout the week. I've compiled these three chapters as one arc to avoid any unnecessary cliffhangers since my post schedule ain't currently the best. Hope you enjoy.
Anime & Comics · TheCursedMillenial
I must admit that I love the story and it is a very nice breath of fresh air on this app. The way you are going with the village is nice and I hope that he will start learning fuinjutsu soon
I don't know what to say, the way you wrote your characters was good, jokes were funny and everything was fine until you started nerfing Mc so you can keep the cannon storyline hole after 5 min of fighting he didn't have any more haki are you joking, and that wasn't even the worst thing the worst thing is that you know how strong he is and how his abilities work and you still made this abomination of a fight
Autor:
souce
The Chaldean Master nodded flatly, "It makes me wanna build a time machine so I can go back 5 minutes and shoot myself in the fucking face for thinking letting you on the stage was a good idea."
Anime & Comics · Bleap
Review chapter 4 I has potential to be good but to little chapter's for a full review
This looks promising
Autor did we ever tell you that you are the best
Well you took your time but you made it back to this story so again thank you for the chapter again
Fantastic Dream Upon This Wonderful Existence
Anime & Comics · Haios_Paradox