Perfect choice as of the moment Author. In the future, MC can partner with local or international shipbuilders to establish a higher level or more expensive manufacturing like naval ships. We have the potential locations in Cavite, Subic or Cebu. Ei, I suggest that Michael include drones. It's changing the war strategy.
Price: 100,000 System Points.
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Sci-fi · Faux1231
Politicians ain't serious with afp modernization. All just grandstanding. Budget on modernization ain't getting significant increase. No big ticket contract signed. I guess politicians fooling themselves on the huge budget needed due to the decades of neglect modernizing the PH Military.
Requirements: Successfully establish the company, develop at least three advanced defense technologies, and secure government contracts.
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
I wonder who's managing Michael's security now. If I remembered correctly his security team was provided/arranged by Carter. We're these guys replaced? Did he secretly create a new team? It could have been explained in a chapter or two. It felt rushed or something a miss.
"Oh no no no," Michael quickly dismissed her assumption. "I don't trust independent contractors, which is why I did my own digging. I had him under surveillance the entire time. I knew he would eventually show his true colors."
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
Why did Michael hire a security firm from abroad in the first place? We have elites locally or perhaps it's foreshadowing Michael establishing his Defense industry? Why not him establish his defense industry with a security firm..
Military to have more side story action.
It was his thought, he did expect that the private aircraft would be expensive, but not that kind of expensive. He had other enterprises he'd want to enter, such as military, communications, and computers, all of which required a lot of funding.
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
he could have just evacuated earlier. he's smart so he can come up with an excuse for leaving early.
Pain flared, sharp, and bright, but Michael's focus remained unbroken. He touched his shoulder, his fingers coming away with blood, confirming the graze. His breathing was heavy, adrenaline coursing through his veins, but he was alive—his calculations had saved him, if only just.
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
Good and smart writing. As realistic as it can be. Only concern are the time skips that the story might look too rush. Overall a better read. Good job author. Cheers. Ps. Can you put some more action on the story as the MC might encounter dangerous plots or enemies as he grow his business empire.
Micheal should establish his own Executive protection team (VIP security). Not just hire event security. He should have his trusted security aides man. He's now by this time rich and famous. He should personally know his security team.
"No, it's best that I stay here and do what I need to do. Do you have full confidence in the security firm you
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
It's about time to include Michael's security. he's already rich and famous. time to gather an elite executive protection team.
Dr. Villanueva chuckled in response, appreciating the attempt at humor in the midst of such groundbreaking work. "I'll take your word for it then," he replied, still smiling. "But seriously, it's revolutionary what you're doing here. But I'm concerned about your safety."
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
Michael should have his own business helicopter for trips that are far enough that going on land would take some time. To save time and be more secure.
"Can I visit the shipyard tomorrow?" Michael asked, eager to see the facility firsthand.
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231