You need to hire an editor ASAP
That’s an unbalanced lvl 1 inspection with his low level.
[it's simple, your inspection skill is currently at level 1]
King of succubus
Fantasy · Golden_raise
These run-on sentences are atrocious
“But I can harm everyone else around you.”
[Correct. However, you do not have to fear me, as I will not, and cannot, harm you]
The Conquering and Genius Magical Engineer
Fantasy · LaPlume
“How rude…. At least call it art.”
"How rude... The name is Manga."
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
Yes, the culture is strong with this one.
"Absolutely not! I will buy more animes for you! So stay home!"
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
Quickly, administer the headpats.
"Isn't that a good thing?" I blurted out, after all, I don't know what the word 'yandere' means, but Violet and Sasha are adorable, and that's all that matters.
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
Ngl. I did too.
"Do you remember that pink-haired girl anime that we watched in our teens?"
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
These are off. He already added to them
[Attributes points:10]
My Bio-Nanotech System
Action · Supreme_IQ