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My suggestion to you would be to start part 2 of the same story as it looks incomplete..... even if this book has been marked complete ..... one can follow it with part 2 .......you can do this after a break ..... ease your pressures first..... come out fresh ... with more ideas .... regards

I would suggest you take a week off .... as the pressures ease out ... come out and continue.... so far have been enjoying your story ..... !!

complete chapter is unnecessary description of same thing in different ways .... should have been more productive to advance the story .

waiting for new chapters.... speed is little slow these few days .

very disappointed.... even after reminders the author is not putting in more chapters . Seems like my money got wasted for no fault of mine .

please update new chapters to keep readers engrossed. It becomes very frustrating if one has read and then suddenly the story has stopped in between . Money spended on all the chapters I've read seems to have been waisted .

continue the book .... waiting since last 4=5 days for new chapters to roll in . waiting for Allan Peterson's true entry into the game .

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

sailing smoothly ⛵️