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male LV 2
2022-05-12 Unido United States
Emblemas 3

Moments 20
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2 years ago
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"Playful smiiiles Die gets rooooooolled Bathe in sorrow my tomorrow is built upon yo fleeeeshhhhhh Okay I'll stop

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2 years ago
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Yeaaaaah boy were counting up

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2 years ago
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So there will always be quests like that using the system? I love it its refreshing and the gamelike aspect of the novel, which I find is most often wasted on System/Gamelike novels, is beautifully put into words here

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2 years ago
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Man the paragraphs are long. Maybe put some space between them

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2 years ago
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My it reminds me I should be touching grass more eh :/

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2 years ago
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I kinda like that Haruto guy now... Epic. I look forward to his meeting with our MC soon

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2 years ago
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Switching pov? Blegh If it deepens the plot I guess I cant complain

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2 years ago
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2nd Review after the first 70 chapters… It’s ACTUALLY Good. I’m loving it, reading through all that was out in about a day without being BORED even ONCE. Really a Gem. Based on only potential I would lump this novel together with the greatest classics of the light novel genre we all love or anime or whatever big stuff you got, and I mean it. Can you believe that? It’s actually great. The concept is so original it feels surreal tbh I keep wondering how that work even found a place here among all the loads of nonoriginal bs we find here… so much its different and actually has originality to it. I mean just read the first chapters and tell me it hasnt hooked you already Definitely give this novel a chance… the author is a genius I’m very happy to have discovered it so early and you will too. If you too were getting tired of all the recycled novels and trops seen and read over and over again, that ones definity for you so give it a try Uploads are stable Feels like an actual BOOK written by a pro I’m so hooked The story has potential to go anywhere The characters feel alive (for once) they aren’t simple words and sentences that dont make sense, So well written so far and deep, I wont say it enough, Im f ing hooked The writing quality is almost flawless And the storyline and plot is an absolute breath of fresh air on a website full of recycled and sh**ty story with no spark You definitely have my support author! Give this novel a chance and let’s go to the top… we need way more chapters

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2 years ago
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should drop a real rview now. Thanks for all the chapters it was sooo awesome. Don't ever drop this work, author, or Ill have your skin