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No, I was planning to give her his equipment. and later give her his powers and she loses the power of rogue sun

Well, I can’t say much because there won’t be a big world shattering reveal or hidden twist later in the story. The world is straightforward, so anything I share could end up being a spoiler. I designed it this way on purpose since this is my first novel.

I didn’t really understand anything you wrote, but I asked because I want to know what people might think about it. It’s one of those stories I wanted someone else to write, but since no one did, I decided to try it myself. I’m just not sure how others will feel about it

To be honest with you, I kinda want to hear more than it sounds good

What do you mean, read the story?

Well, I can’t tell you too much about the story because it’s not like One Piece, where the end goal is laid out from the start. But I can say it’s a lot more original than most of what you’ve probably read. The novel is called White Lightning, and its power system blends superpowers with a touch of cultivation. The story takes place in a world where Hunters exist, and guilds play a big role. Yeah, I know – you’ve probably read plenty of novels with similar elements. But like I said, there’s a lot that sets this one apart. For example, the story begins with the main character in his final year at the Academy, just two weeks from graduation. It’s not a reincarnation story – this is my first novel, and I’m aiming for something original. I’ve planned out how it will start and end, but there’s plenty of space in between but I will work it out naturally. It’s my first time writing something completely original but I’m doing my best to make it something special.