I did not think about that , sorry. It is a pretty good idea. Thank you for answering my comment.
Unlike humans, most other races aged differently, years weren't the way they measured their lives but let's leave for another day, the Lamia queen saw sparks flying those two and she chuckled before clearing her throat to interrupt them.
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
These repeated "lets leave for another day" phrase is annoying, as a reader I know you are giving details of this universe and I like it but this repeated phrase is unnecesarry
Unlike humans, most other races aged differently, years weren't the way they measured their lives but let's leave for another day, the Lamia queen saw sparks flying those two and she chuckled before clearing her throat to interrupt them.
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
There is something missing in this sentence.
"This time manifest your soul condensed gauntlets but also channel physical energy into them".
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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I think there is a mistake this chapter is the same chapter before
quarter of a trillion is 250 billion not 2.5 billion
'*sigh*, it's good to be a second-generation young master.' Li Huang who was still salty that he didn't have a quarter of a trillion to spend on [Whispering Orchid Flute] thought bitterly.
Eastern · Amiro0o
7th was the Sect Master of all female sect at the start, 8th was the Grand Elder of that sect, 9th should be Elder Hua
The lineup included the vibrant First Concubine Kang Huian, the graceful Second Concubine Han Xifeng, the enchanting Silver Tailed Fox Race beauty Third Concubine Bixi Shuyan, the stoic Fourth Concubine Xiao Ling, the alluring Fifth Concubine Meng Xiangyi, the elegant Sixth Concubine Xu Yuting, the spirited Seventh Concubine Yue Yanling, the cold Eighth Concubine Yi Yen, and the gentle Ninth Concubine Hua Qiao. This was just the beginning of Wang Jian's intimate journey.
Eastern · Evil_Villain
I think this is what happened: She is sovereign of equality came to lower worlds to spread her dao to empower herself when she came here and get entangled with the guy who cultivates the life dao and karma dao (this dude suppressing his realm to cultivate here) This man want to get her treasure so he somehow with his powers make her owe huge debt to this world so she can't escape from here (I dont understand why) When she realize this she put the debt to treasure and order to treasure to find someone who can carry the debt and repay it from another world. This is how Han Cai get the system or treasure. Now she wants to take the treasure back and got away from here and put all the debt to Han Cai. She was waiting him to use the treasure but he didn't use it so she poisened him with wine and kiss him and get his now karma (karma of him using the system after born as Yan Kai because I guess his karma of Han Cai is paid woth that river water torture thing) so han cai sometime make a second soul hide it in his first soul so he can move after she take away the half of the treasure (I am not sure at this part) and make a marriage contract with the witness of the dao of harmony so she can't harm him. But he stil owes huge debt to this world and he have half of what she has.This chapters are both a huge info dumb and plot reveal. I probably misunderstood some parts. I would appreciate if you could help me with those parts.Sorry for my grammar and other mistakes.
I think chapter in wrong Order if you read like Treacherous Girlfriend->Dao Treasure->Farewell to Bloved(272->274->273) It makes sense.
Aren't the last 3 episodes a repetition of the previous ones?
I am the young master
Eastern · Amiro0o