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Silver_Chaos77
male LV 11It's been 7 years since I started reading, four years on Webnovel, and I write as a hobby, I especially like fan fics, western and Eastern fantasy as well as system novels. Anime and Manga Too.
2022-03-15 Unido Global
New fanfic/novel, new review, leave your questions down below and I'll answer them when possible! Worked hard on this so I hope it's satisfactory!
It's called logic, the fic isn't even 30 chapters in. It stands to reason that ANYONE who was an avid fan of the show and actually got to their world would want to meet them, criticizing that is just stupid. Especially since the storyline revolves around them. It's what he does afterwards that counts.
Also, the entire premise of the fic is for the MC to be prepared in advance for the events of the show, having him go down with the others would defeat the whole purpose and premise of the fic
The fun method, directly joining the hundred. That way he can live and interact with his favorite characters, get closer to those he wants to fuc-- be his wives, and experience their hardship as his own.
The 100: Advanced Preparation
TV · Silver_Chaos77
I can recognise criticism when I see it, this isn't it, and it's common knowledge this is a fan fic as per the tag, you don't have to go on a whole self Monologue about it. I don't like what I did with the story progression, but the opening I will defend, as it's something unique and creative, not the same copy pasted formula, which you should appreciate but you clearly live in your own little world
The fun method, directly joining the hundred. That way he can live and interact with his favorite characters, get closer to those he wants to fuc-- be his wives, and experience their hardship as his own.
The 100: Advanced Preparation
TV · Silver_Chaos77
who would want to read a hundred fanfic without the hundred... °ω°?
Idk, I really want to rewrite the whole AI thing to be more realistic, but I don't have the time, so if I do continue it, it won't be with a rewrite. I'm kind of busy right now so maybe an update shall come next week?
I'll talk about what I found bad then about what I found good. Bad: First of all, the info dumps in the first 3 chapters are INSANE, 100 paragraphs plus of just listening skills and their uses, now after reading all that you expect to see them being used in a fight right? No. which brings me to my next point. Fights. They were boring, the MC didn't utilise even a tenth of the abilities he has, some contradictions happen that don't make sense which only serves to make the fight seem forced, for example fights he would easily win are blown out of proportion for no reason, I personally got very frustrated at that. He gets many OP abilities, then during fights it's as if he forgot they existed. Also, when a change of POV occurs, first person isn't used which makes things confusing at best. Good: The OG the writer added in aren't half bad, minimal to no spelling and grammatical mistakes, story development is great though forced at times, the chapters are long, the established world build is utilised well and you can tell some creative juices were spent on this. Changes: As the story progressed, the fights are still frustrating but the info dumps did get lighter. I would love if the author adopted the 'show not tell' policy, and train in writing fights scenes more to get better. At least use AI those fights really aren't readable. Do I recommend this? Well, make your own opinion of that and I hope this review/rant helped. ♡
Ever heard of , show not tell? At least have him use his skills in the fights, they are always underwhelming, he doesn't use his skills for all the hype that was put into them.
Now that I generally know my new abilities I decide to get ready to leave my dimension.
I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
50 paragraph power up info dump incoming 😞
Best to learn what changed as soon as possible.
I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
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original MP: Reaching the Peak as a Sect Master through my Disciples!
After a life filled with disappointments, Ling Taixu finds himself unexpectedly reincarnated into a fantasy world through the very game he once played. Awakening in a realm governed by powerful martial arts and ancient secrets, he discovers he has the chance to rewrite his destiny. Determined to seize this second chance, he establishes the Enchanted Heaven Sect, a sanctuary dedicated to nurturing only the most talented female disciples. As he trains them to harness their potential, he must navigate a treacherous world filled with rival sects, hidden dangers, and the looming threat of an impending invasion. With each disciple's growth, Taixu finds his own power rising through the games system that still stuck to him, but the path to greatness is fraught with challenges. As bonds of trust and loyalty are tested, can he protect his newfound family and lead them to victory against the forces that seek to tear them apart? Join Ling Taixu on an exhilarating journey of cultivation, camaraderie, and self-discovery in a world where only the strongest prevail. Will he rise to the peak of martial prowess, or will he fall to the shadows lurking in the dark? Wait...This world...Is this actually Martial Peak? =================================== Notes: Obviously I don't own martial peak, so any elements relating to it aren't my own creation. Second, the system plays a pretty big part in the story yet it doesn't have an AI or a system spirit, nor are there any quests that drive the plot and force the MC. Third, the world is set thousands of years before the plot of Martial Peak began, and I also am not very well versed in Martial Peak(MP) lore, so forgive some of my mistakes regarding that. (All MP info is from Novel not manga) *There will be no dedicated R18 chapters, only segments in various chapters. Cause I don't see the point in making whole chapter of R18, I mean like, just go watch some videos... Most importantly, write a review and give your feedback, I read every single comment. Hope you enjoy.4 Chs 89 Coleções
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GAME OF THRONES: A REIGN OF BLOOD!
4.36
MC gets frustrated at how Game Of Thrones ended and it just so happens that a certain entity entered his body at that time, reincarnating him into the world of GOT. MC is reborn in Essos and makes it his goal to change the fate of his waifu Daenerys, however along the way, his goal becomes so much more. From companions who he genuinely cares for to gradually forging an empire of his own through blood, all the while fighting things and forces that shouldn't have been in this world. And fortunately, whatever reincarnated him, came with unique abilities that he could use to his will, with a little blood of course. ****** Facts You Need To Know. ++No system, however MC will create his own mental replica of a system in order to organise his abilities. ++This mainly follows TV show version not the book, including timeline and age of characters. ++Since GOT is a somewhat weak world for someone the level of the MC, this will be slightly AU with additional forces from THE KNOWN WORLD and other supernatural creatures. +++There are some pretty messed up dark scenes, though the novel is mostly chill, GOT is definitely not famous for being family friendly. Disclaimer: I don't own any GOT characters or photos.35 Chs 5.3k Coleções
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Emergence: New Beginnings
When a mysterious new presence emerged before Earth, it was unlike anything humanity had ever encountered. Calling itself Emergence, this Godly entity declared it was here to reshape the world. Being told by its support system given to it by a Galactic Organisation that Earth will meet its fate in the next Supremacy Battle, it started working. With Earth as its first planet, it will gather followers, evolve, and fight against those in its way. This isn't just a story about the birth of a God and its path, but also about the people influenced by it. Will Earth Rise to the occasion and finally evolve enough to face the Universe proudly? How will the God go about it's path, building it's religious, creating whole planets, maybe conquering the Universe?! ========= Some basic info that might make or break this novel for you :) MC: Emergence + Multiple side characters Love: Definitely Harem: Minimal, each with a whole character arc, no getting women like Poke-mone Gender: Genderless. Mostly Female, you'll get what I mean as you read. This is crucial, You must absolutely, enjoy reading6 Chs 30 Coleções
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Moved to Fan fic
When a mysterious new presence emerged before Earth, it was unlike anything humanity had ever encountered. Calling itself Emergence, this Godly entity declared it was here to reshape the world. Being told by its support system given to it by a Galactic Organisation that Earth will meet its fate in the next Supremacy Battle, it started working. With Earth as its first planet, it will gather followers, evolve, and fight against those in its way. This isn't just a story about the birth of a God and its path, but also about the people influenced by it. Will Earth Rise to the occasion and finally evolve enough to face the Universe proudly? How will the God go about it's path, building it's religious, creating whole planets, maybe conquering the Universe?! ========= Some basic info that might make or break this novel for you :) MC: Emergence + Multiple side characters Love: Definitely Harem: Minimal, each with a whole character arc, no getting women like Poke-mone Gender: Genderless. Mostly Female, you'll get what I mean as you read. This is crucial, You must absolutely, enjoy reading3 Chs 0 Coleções
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The 100: Advanced Preparation
3.82
Mc, who was a genius, after his untimely death, found himself transmigated into the body of Leon Starzesta, otherwise known as Leon from a rich and powerful family in the year 2048, 4 years before the nuclear apocalypse later known as Praimfaya. Realising he was in the world of a TV show he loved, The 100, he refused to die so easily and built his own bunker, which he fitted with food and equipment he thought would aid him in the future, as well as created combat suits, weapons and more using resources of the modern era. Follow along as Leon, with no cheats, magical abilities or strange systems, and using only the wonders of modern technology and his wits, creates droids, gets all the hot women, builds his own bunker and dominates this post apocalyptic mayhem Disclaimer: I don't own any pictures or the hundred, only the story and any original characters.13 Chs 2.5k Coleções
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GAME OF THRONES: REIGN OF BLOOD
THIS FANFIC HAS BEEN MOVED TO THE FANFIC SECTION SIMPLY ADD AN ! AFTER THE TITLE OR CLICK ON MY AUTHOR PROFILE TO REACH IT. THANKS MC gets frustrated at how Game Of Thrones ended and it just so happens that a certain entity entered his body at that time, reincarnating him into the world of GOT. MC is reborn in Essos and makes it his goal to change the fate of his waifu Daenerys, and fortunately, whatever reincarnated him, granted him unique abilities that he could use to his will. ****** No harem, but there might be some side chicks, Daenerys will be the main though. No system, however MC will create his own mental replica of a system in order to organise his abilities. There are some pretty messed up dark scenes, though the novel is mostly chill, GOT is definitely not famous for being family friendly. Disclaimer: I don't own any GOT characters or the cover.11 Chs 317 Coleções
Well, it really is a black hole 😉 lmao
Everlean's body was like a black hole, hungrily pulling him in as if trying to absorb everything he had to give.
Marvel: Impregnation System
Anime & Comics · LaughingFiend