Benjamin_Leib

Benjamin_Leib

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2022-02-25 Unido Global
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Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
7 days ago
Commented

how did he go from being lvl 5 to lvl 4 in gust a few paragraphs

" Senior brother looks so charming, his hair is so pretty; I want to give birth to his baby!" 

LUCKY REINCARNATION: REINCARNATED WITH A HAREM SYSTEM

LUCKY REINCARNATION: REINCARNATED WITH A HAREM SYSTEM

Fantasía · Vee_High

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
7 days ago
Commented

is his name Leon or Ivan? It seems to change in the last few chapters. It was swamped in the last 3 or 4 paragraphs in this chapter.

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
2 months ago
Commented

The book has a lot of gender swapping in it, this chapter has it in the same paragraph in one sentence. Not just in different parts of a chapter swapping he to she.

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
8 months ago
Commented

Generator swapping again, is it this way for the rest of the book?

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
8 months ago
Commented

Gender swapping is really bad in this chapter, need to fix it for a better reading experience. The generator of the instructor in previous chapters was not as bad and gave an ok reading experience, but should be fixed as well. The book has been good otherwise and hope that there is less gender swapping that got missed in the editing.😁

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
9 months ago
Commented

Here we go again with the gender swapping from she to him, see it all the time

She was known as the cold beauty but now, a boy was standing close to him. 

I Have A Lifespan System

I Have A Lifespan System

Oriental · _EverSmile

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
9 months ago
Commented

What was it that his opponent didn't get? Was it a beating, humiliation, broken leg, broken arm? Where is the rest of that statement?!!!!!!!

No one expected her to be versatile with such a heavy sword. Now, when people thought of a sword, they would think of a girl with a heavy broadsword.

I Have A Lifespan System

I Have A Lifespan System

Oriental · _EverSmile

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
9 months ago
Commented

Is the crown Prince a he or she? Can't keep the gender straight in this chapter, every other paragraph it changes from he to she and back to he then to she.

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
11 months ago
Commented

It's a good book so far it could use a niece to nephew change on Day 15,820. Or just change Charles to a female in the whole book.

Benjamin_Leib
Benjamin_Leib
11 months ago
Commented

He/She issue with the main character, it's not bad in this chapter and case but I don't know about the rest of the book.

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