really got annoying since he went to Hogwarts... the diary cannot be physically destroyed (without fiendfyre etc.) ergo you cannot just rip a page out and give someone...otherwise you could make one book with a thousand pages a hocrux, than rip every page out and distribute it everywhere on the world and have 1000 horcruxes...
"A paper cut?"
The Will of Gil (Gilderoy Lockhart SI)
Movies · DragonField
yeah...drop. Bye.
The others joined him awkwardly, but they all stopped when Brandon slammed his hand on the table and pointing at Alys he said "We will have a talk, young lady. I nor your elder brother will be shielding you from the wrath of your mother." Then pointing at Bjorn he said "And you! Welcome to the family." Right after saying that, Brandon started to laugh again.
A Song Of Ice And Fire: The King Of Winter
Book&Literature · EddyVirgil
What bullshit is the situation between Bjorn and Alys… If they accept such bullshit why don’t they let people rape the other noble ladys of the north and call it a marriage as well. If that is not resolved, I will drop this ff unfortunately. Was a nice „op“ novel till now too. A shame…
it would be nice if the MC is actually a little bit heroic as well. I get the whole "every action must benefit the MC" mentality you are portraying. But I would like the MC more if he would actually want to help people in his thoughts, even if it is not the only thought like the OG Midoriya, but more like a part of his decision. Maybe like 30% or something :D
really annoying arc. Forced plot. Even if Harry wanted to kill the Basilisk later l, he could have just ambushed the girl and taken the Diary from her.
nice chapter. I would have liked this mission to happen 1-2 months after his graduation and a couple c rank missions. The MC being able to defeat Suigetsu would have been morw believable that way. now it's just a little to soon for my liking. the rest is really nicely done. The fights progression was realistic as far as I can say. Am excited how this continues.
But you are only at chapter 34 on pat. or am I missing something? Thanks regardless for the chapter!
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Surviving The Last Of Us World
Video Games · kibishi718
Writing quality is nice and update stability as well. My major complaint is the mc though. He is, imo, pretty assholish. He is illustrated as cold and heartless to OG Thomas‘ family. I mean I get that you are shocked and so on, but he is acting like an emo brat which puts me off to be honest. So I will not continue to read because the personality of the mc is not my cup of tea. Nonetheless, other people might like it more so good luck to you author!
Stolen storys from ff.net. Naruto: Uchiha Chronicles by NXSE and revolution by cloud9stories. Shameless „author“
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original Naruto: Uzumaki Rebirth
Waking up in a body that is not mine was pretty confusing. Waking up as a redheaded Naruto Uzumaki even more so. A village on the horizon of an invasion. Being hunted by a organisation of people who could kill me with a pencil, John Wick style, was not pleasant either. There was only one thing I could do...wait, what is shooting out of my hand! Strong!Naruto, Redhead!Naruto, SI8 Chs 529 Coleções
How ridiculous that you made Kushina able to use KCM. And don't even try to explain it away with Kurama helping her. That would not have worked because of Kuramas "hatred filled chakra". That is the whole premise of Naruto using the Waterfall of truth etc. in canon Kushina was unable to use Kuramas chakra at all. She literally packed him away as tightly as possible.
Naruto: Transmigrated as an Uchiha
Anime & Comics · NoviceAuthor