bagus ceritanya, gak terduga alurnya. bahasanya menarim dan mudah di mengerti. permasalahan di rumah tangga. keren banget lah. kapan aku bisa nulis kayak gini. hiks.
so is the beautifull story. I hope the story have consisten and great character development. The Narration is very good, I thought is so perfect. Good Job Author.
aku juga jatuh cinta sama cerita ini, tapi ogah jatuh cinta sama iblis dan malaikat maut. aaargh.
Ini ceritanya menarik deh coba kalian baca, tentang vampir yang pemalu. awalnya aja udah bikin deg-degan sayang baru 3 bab. aku menunggu kelanjutan ceritamu author, jangan lpa terus up author. Semangat.
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wow, amazing. suke sekali same ni cerite. saye nak bace cerita awak, seronok. good job for Author. so happy and hope you bise bikin macam ni cerite lagi.
the youth werewolf starting angrier
"Get out of the way, Matheus! I don't want to see you die by my hands!" Hermes' tone of voice sounded very frightening. Loud and full of murderous aura.
Cruel Of The World
Fantasy · KSIndra
I love this story. I think this story is very interesting. Why not? Because This story has completed scenes in every chapter. one by one I read this story making me want to read more and more. By the way how to buy coins for opening the lock chapter?
aah, Fall In Love always so beautifful.
Hermes glared. "Are you crazy? Where do you want me to be with a guy, I've found my very beautiful partner!" Hermes protest. Matheus breathed a sigh of relief, "thank goodness you've found part--" he hadn't finished speaking yet. His brain immediately worked on what Hermes meant. "Wait! So you are now fall in love?"
Cruel Of The World
Fantasy · KSIndra
yah, sayang banget udah di kunci. maaf ya thor, kalau bukanya pakai gratisan
Malaikat Dan Iblis Yang Mencintaiku
Fantasy · KSIndra