Thank you for the amazing, well-structured review ✨😭🙏. You took a lot of time to write this, so I must show my gratitude. Most of the mistakes you've mentioned are indeed ones I have come to acknowledge. After all, this is technically the third web novel I’ve written, so I'm largely inexperienced. Trying to defend myself would be pointless—only by accepting faults can one grow. Although things do change a bit down the line, I’m not sure you’d be able to wait. All I can simply hope is that the next novel I write is better than this one. Thanks again ✨
Thank you for the review, I'll try my best to improve ✨
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Divine Affiliation: Goddess of Justice and Jurity, Pretoria
Games · Zurbluris
It's better than what I can write 😭
Mancer abilities were hereditary and family members shared affinities. After seeing Lyn's Lightning Mancy in person, he could confirm that he was Silver Assassin Raiden's younger brother.
Eastern · Awespec
Yes 👀
Yes
It was an error, I edited it...
Concubine 1: Sephira Windwhisper
Games · Zurbluris
he did
Thank you for your support, I will continue to do my best ✨
Hope you don't mind, this contains spoilers for future chapters. With a lot of foreshadowing, I've slowly introduced a strange organization attempting to take over the world. To do that, they needed to carry out experiments with dragon kin blood, which led them to raid a dragon kin clan in the wastelands. Alister just so happened to run into them because he was also out searching for the dragon kin to protect them. Obviously, he eradicated all the humans attempting to capture them. That organization will realize that dealing with him alone would be impossible, so instead, they will find a way to pin him against all the major guilds of the mega cities. They will also turn the guilds against him. This will work by the strange organization giving intel to the guilds to raid some ruins that possess a powerful relic. That relic is actually something a future version of Alister warned him to prevent from getting into human hands. If it does, he is to kill the host, regardless of who they are. When a guildmaster obtains this relic, Alister will use all his dragons to kill them, which will cause the other guilds to see him as a threat. The organization will continue directing other guilds to find relics, leading to an all-out war between Alister and all the guilds which will inevitably paint him as an enemy to humanity.
Talent Awakening: Draconic Overlord Of The Apocalypse
Fantasy · Zurbluris