bro gave him a switch
Doom is funnier than you'd imagine
PJO: Son of a Primordial
Book&Literature · Joanjudo
Author the new cover is something…
Did you give up on the quality or something what’s going on
Then it wouldn’t be a story anymore, explaining and weaving I formation into long paragraphs is the base of a story
Your writing is so engaging I even forgot that the detective had the lie detector and I just thought that was his inner voice saying true or lie. Good work
At first you could argue that since ddraigs power is exponential (2^amount of boosts) he is still “weak” until he gets a few boosts, but there was so much time between his first boost and the fight idk. Maybe his power boost where he sacrifices his hair is temp only. Or it could just be that author sucks at writing fight scenes, as after all this is a smut novel.
The detective is right Pringles are the best brand of chips
Imma say the only thing that I don’t like in the chapter is the fact that lays are “the best” brand, since Pringles exists.
to be truthful I enjoyed the earlier chapters more, I think you changed your style a bit