Wait nvm he gets an entire 2x stat boost. realistically I feel like with MCs intelligence he should be able to make it to where he always has his 2x boost whenever he needs it
Passive: Gives the user the ability to tell right from wrong and the ability to judge evil against just.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
This is broken..Justice isn’t a definite thing. MCs Justice could be defined as something completely different. Considering his intelligence he could genuinely just think and force himself to believe “oh these people are trying to fight me? That’s not very just” “You aren’t doing what I want? That’s not just, 50% increase in stats go!”
Passive: Gives the user the ability to tell right from wrong and the ability to judge evil against just.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
Oh!!! Even better
I remember the exact story you’re taking inspiration from and all I can say is that the only way you’ll be able to make the MC not get as OP as the other fanfic is if you nerf a lot of things or set very specific requirements for skills 😭 MHA is a goldmine for any form of gamer system
Tyftc and uhh I’m guessing this story is going to be a slow burn for awhile? Which isn’t bad, but with the resources MC has and the way his intelligence is portrayed most readers think he would’ve already started dungeon diving the moment he got the skill. I understand needing some form of based on why mc does this or that so maybe that’s why you have him so pent up on getting his “revenge” But give him some personal improvements as well since so far it’s just be “cullens did this, Cullen revenge, meet Bella, , can’t do plan since Alice found me using my ability”. All in all it’s a great story and I love the mc so far and if you need a good character to base MC around try going for ’Kira’ from Death Note
Tyftc and yeah MC would fit in that familia since their entire goal is “making a weapon better than helpheastus” or whateve her name is And that genuinely is just impossible unless she purposefully aims to create a dog water weapon and even then it would still be premium compared to the average dogwater item.
Ehhh somewhat, realistically by chapter 40 he should be where he is rn and way stronger so yeah he’s def going slower, but for Gwen it’s prolly just mc going from normal to smarter than Tony stark in the span of a few months
'He is... He's just moving so fast. I fear I might not catch up to him in this lifetime. I want to try harder… for him... For us.' Gwen's thoughts spiraled into their strange relationship. It was damn frustrating. It left a bitter taste on her palate.
Anime & Comics · OneArmedImmortal
I understand being upset, but trying to kill Bella over it or bein this petty is insane😭 At most he should address his displeasure with the entire situation and how they’ve practically forced him into a “become a blood drinking monster or die” situation while letting Bella off on the hook for practically no other reason.
'What would he do if he found her dead on the floor because she accidentally learned of the vampires? I would just be the good guy following the rules then wouldn't I? Just like they had been and Edward said it's better to die than to become a monster right?' The smile on Jack's face kept widening.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
Unironically cool as hell ✌️😭
Was writing this chapter then remembered I had a programming project. Then after, I didn't feel like to write so I went to sleep and woke up motivated once more. Too bad I had to code a program to calculate the MC exp usage and leveling shit. Easy but annoying.
Anime & Comics · IdontHaveaName
Ah, if it had a loophole like that MC would’ve been cracked as hell ❤️🩹 what bases of Justice will it work on? Batman’s sense of Justice? Or your own sense of Justice type of thing
Passive: Gives the user the ability to tell right from wrong and the ability to judge evil against just.
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Movies · WhiteAuthor