Notion_Theory

keen observation alot is planned for the MC

well we've been trying our very best to not reveal too much of the story at once, each setting that's being planned has to feel like it's an actual location and has to fill like it's not being forced upon the reader. the mc is just as clueless of the world as the reader and that's the perspective we're going for when writing. the mc just knows as much as the reader knows

thanks I'll fix the errors

well when writing the story we didn't want to spoil to much about the characters. we want you to learn more about each character though their actions and not just explain them all at once. this story will be pretty long and we've decided that we want to fully explore and expand on each character

the story isn't something I'd usually read but it's really good and the writing is pretty consistent. the story is something I've seen in other books before but the presentation is different and the view is quiet interesting. good book author

the story is really descriptive and builds atmosphere as you read and the writing quality is also top tier. the plot takes a while to get into motion but once it starts moving it's pretty good. good job author

the story picks up by chapter 4 and that's when it begins to shine. the mc is smart but not the generic smart guy type, he has character to him and in some way reminds me of senku from Dr stone. the structure and Grammer of the book is really good and consistent, the paragraphs are short and easier to digest and follow, and the word that's being built in the story has a lot of promise and expectations for the future. good work on the story author this was a good read and I hope you keep up with the good writing.

this book I ls really and a must read. the Grammer and look punctuation are up there with some good books I've read, the mystery and the twists were well done and executed in a way I didn't really expect, the author really did well with this book and I couldn't really find much that I didnt like in the story. it's we'll paced and the plot really grabs you and never lets go. good work author you made a really good and interesting story, keep it up

I really like this story it's so sweet and the pacing is handled well, the main leads really work well together and their chemistry really makes my heart flutter. the writing and story progression are perfect for a slice of life story and the imagery works well and immerses you into the world and the life of the character. I like the entire cast they have really unique and quirky personalities I like this book and I can easily recommend it to anyone