So hum, what part of the story did you like? What part need to be improved and so on?
Did you like at my exact wording, he would start, it says, “you will only receive the Hyuga clan basic….” It did not say he would be restricted that alone, he can always try and learn more, as for why I call life energy, chakra is quite literally just life energy, later on I just start calling it chakra instead of life energy, also him being a hyuga play an important part of the plot, him being unaware of the plot is my way of forcing myself to not be stuck to the canon, for example, I can’t have him randomly going to castle Utgard on the night of the attack why, because he doesn’t even know it exist, I can’t make him go the easy way out because he is unaware of the easy way out, basically I removed my ability to give him a cope out option
Also the heck is At and Ct, I am confused
This world was a world full of titans....oh fuck, he only watched up to when the female titan attacked.
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I am using the path, he can close up or open them up, so for a titan shifter if the path are closed they can’t transform, if open then they can transform, as for everyone that is not Eldian, I will just say for them what he is doing is quite litteraly hitting their pressure points
Akira was a regular guy by all figures of imagination he was a regular person, there was nothing about him that screamed that he was special.
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You do know he can also open Tenketsu point,Ie buff someone, there is nothing stopping him from doing that to a Titan shifter, the reverse is also possible, he can also nerf them
Akira was a regular guy by all figures of imagination he was a regular person, there was nothing about him that screamed that he was special.
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Well I wanted to experiment and not everyone has to like it
"You would still see your opponent Tenketsu point and be able to shut it down, with titan shifter you will be able to stop them from transforming if certain Tenketsu are struck, however, you will only receive the Hyuga clan basic, The Byakugan, gentle fist and no jutsu not related to the clan"
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That why it’s more interesting, he is unaware of most of the plot, this force me to make him do creative choices
This world was a world full of titans....oh fuck, he only watched up to when the female titan attacked.
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Yes
"You would still see your opponent Tenketsu point and be able to shut it down, with titan shifter you will be able to stop them from transforming if certain Tenketsu are struck, however, you will only receive the Hyuga clan basic, The Byakugan, gentle fist and no jutsu not related to the clan"
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Think of the energy as oil, in exchange for the oil, the god allow him to isekai in another world with a buff that would make it easier for him to thrive
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