Author i love the story but the chapters ar ekillkng me, they’r too short
What do you think of the new cover art?
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
TV · Stingleese
Hmm Author, when they return to camp i would hope you make it so that aerion asks infront of everyone for rheanyras hand just for onse let him be selfish because its clear he likes her and she him
Also if you have any ideas! I literally mean ANY just let me know, seriously anything helps. I've got a bit of a creative block going on rn.
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
TV · Stingleese
I want the mc to become a bit bold and ask for rheanyras hand, also if you can there have been too many hare on daemon in fanfics, i want daemond to form a deep bond with adrion because daemon truly cares about his brother viserys so why not aerion?
Author, sorry but you dropped some sauce…continue to cook….PEAAAAK, i love it well done man, i realy didnt expect it to be like this but you couldnt have reaveld it any better.
"Arise, Prince Aerion Brightflame."
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
TV · Stingleese
Not bad, not bad at all, but i think there was some substance missing from this chapter. I know aerion is angry and worried about whats happening but its almoust like nothing is going his way wich makes the antiyof whats going to happen greater. Also onse again i feel like the interaction between rheanyra and Aerion felt off
Thoughts? On the direction of the Arc in general?
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
TV · Stingleese
Naah, i think its the childrens fighting pits where they kidnap and watch as they fight
That was good, this gives aerion the motive to uproot and destroy this organisation, i hope to see a bit more development on rheanyras and aerions relationship because so far its been small convorsations you know. Something else i would like to add is after e hopefully destroys this organisation, he gets a noble tital and lands if possible??
This is good, if he find the childrens fighting pits and takes care of it himself it could be something that could potentialy give him a noble ship, or am i wrong? You can maybe give him a cool bastard targaryen name like blackfyre?? Give it a thought?
Can I also ask where everyone wants the story to end up? Do you want Aerion to die as a tragic hero, live a happily ever after, I'm not even considering the ending yet but I'm just wondering what you guys think?
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
TV · Stingleese
I liked the chapter, it was good even though it was a bit shorter. Anyway you’re going about this well, now you can have viserys make an inquiry about his birth, maybe make him question why he not only has purple eyes but targaruen features even though his hair is white, he should still have the targaryen beauty and the purple eyes and what would make things even better if aerion has the same quitcks as baalon had and then viserys notices. Give it a thought author
Thoughts? Definitely a short chapter but wanted to scene to end here and didn't wanna drag it sorry lol
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
TV · Stingleese
Good chapter g, would have liked to see more interactions between Arrion and deamon but good none the less. Before the dragon arc where Aerion tames a dragon, if it possible could something happen between him and rheanyra that solidifies Aerion to want to as for her hand and in court infront of every lord lady and small council member, because he hasnt been selfish since the first chapter. One more thing, i feel like the relationship between viserys and aerion is one of business and not of brothehood, yes i could argue they have an age gap and a diference in status but you would think that viserys would like to get to know his brother more… Think about it author
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
TV · Stingleese