Mystic_Dragoon

Mystic_Dragoon

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2021-11-08 Unido Global
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Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
10 months ago
Posted

The first few chapters are not promising. Already I can see myself groaning at the sight of yet another overpowered MC with the personality of stale cardboard. MCs like this are boring and a dime a dozen and the y sacrifice character and story in favour for a power fantasy but to each their own. But not for me. For a story a "random guest" praised as better in character and story alone on my own story out of the blue on an entirely different platform and was a crossover. I don't see that. Not to mention the ambiguous nature of the comment I received didn't specify the real faults of my story which I hoped I can rectify here with some of the faults I have noticed.

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

you did just kick him Miao

Cheng Heng looked at Zhou Miao but did not say anything. However, an angry expression appeared on the blank face in the emoji box.

The Eloping Female Supporting Character Transmigrates and Changes Her Fate!

The Eloping Female Supporting Character Transmigrates and Changes Her Fate!

General · JQK

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

loathing! unadulterated loathing.

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

Akira as the true male lead for the win!!!

"Oh, my God." I muttered for the third time as the scene of Akira kissing me replayed in my mind.

If I'm Male, I Can Avoid a Yandere, Right?

If I'm Male, I Can Avoid a Yandere, Right?

Urban · SkyHighLimits

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

yeah sure he did tried to maybe murder her. but hey let's not mention that.

 "I would say Corey, he seem more genuine than the others and for me, it seems like he is the only one that really loves Roselyn and cares about her." Chelsea said, suddenly appearing in front of him, making him flinch and retreat back a little, to get some distance between the two of them. She was reading her book and drinking tea as usual, being a back character and only appearing sometimes so why is talking to him now?

Royal Rose

Royal Rose

Fantasy · MiKouki

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

Local man confirmed to be too kinky to be tortured.

 "Go ahead, I don't mind." Liam replied with a smirk, getting closer to her as she kept lashing out and hitting him randomly, with a scared expression on her face and kept backing away until she fell back and he was able to take the whip from her hair and then banged his face against hers, making her faint and collapse on the floor, lifeless and not giving any signs of being up. "That was easier than I though." He commented, with a smile, then looked back at Oliver, untying him and gently putting him on the ground.

Royal Rose

Royal Rose

Fantasy · MiKouki

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

A little unnerving. hrmmm well it's not a red flag. But let get put an Amber one just to be safe.

As usual, the smile on Wyatt's face was a little unnerving. It was almost as though he could look through all the layers and walls she had put up, diving right into the center of her thoughts. There seemed to not be much she could hide from him, Alice realized. That was a terrifying thought.

A Courtyard of Roses

A Courtyard of Roses

Fantasy · twelvewstars

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

He said the line!!! GET HIM!

That girl. She's an interesting one.

A Courtyard of Roses

A Courtyard of Roses

Fantasy · twelvewstars

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

as so often is the case. considering those in power would prefer their past to be glorified and embellished to the east of their ability.

There was no such thing as 'lord' or 'master' or 'sir' with each other. They acted like equals, a true rarity in Gladiolum, as far as Alice could tell. Then again, all she had ever learned of the country were information Wyatt and Charlie fed her. She had gone through some of the books in the home's private library but the information in those books seemed more like propaganda than anything.

A Courtyard of Roses

A Courtyard of Roses

Fantasy · twelvewstars

Mystic_Dragoon
Mystic_Dragoon
2 years ago
Commented

Yup definitely a male lead.