You geting beter?
Ready to start again?
I agree, it goes a little too fast, would like to see more interaction with the projects she is working on
Ambrosia? Isn't that for the food?
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a bit forced, but okay, I think it should be elaborated with more backstory
Este livro foi excluído.
Aaaaahhhhh Morreeee!
Try googling: meddling giant that's your answer
the quality has dropped since the chapter 31 as if it turned into wish fulfillment you need a plan or soft structure I recommend that you watch a couple of videos from Brandon Sanderson on this topic still a great story but I feel like all the potential I saw at the beginning, which is huge You are squandering because you have no vision of where you want to go with the story but those are just my observations as a reader you do what you want, after all, this is your story
A Skeptical Slytherins Revolution
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