Yeah, that's fair; after re-reading over some of the later chapters and the noble meetup, I realized that I made my mc way too nice, even to the point of cluelessness, and once I get to editing later chapters I'll make sure to fix that. Thanks for pointing it out though ^_^.
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Yeah, it doesn't, and is something I will hopefully change by the end of today. Also, regarding how chapters 25 and 26 have plot points that develope in an unrealistic way, once I get to them, I will make sure to correct those as well. Thanks for pointing it out ^_^.
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Don't worry about it, I know how easy it is to get carried away when criticizing someone, also thanks for ranking my novel so high on your list ^_^.
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After looking further into it, I see myself agreeing with your statements regarding the potential danger merchants pose to Moura and would like to apologize for my lack of thought while writing this part of the book. I would also like to thank you for pointing it out and will be sure to fix this part of the story before making any new chapters.
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Correct me if I am wrong, but to my knowledge, unlike nobles, merchants did not own armies, and although economically influential, ordinary merchants were at best on par with nobles. As for selling blueprints to weapons, I am pretty sure it would take someone truly braided to bring the concept of such weapons into a world where countries are constantly at war. And may I remind you, carding machines and water frames were used to facilitate the production of textiles, not as weapons.
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Well, as unlikely as that would be, considering that there are other towns nearby that could be used to compare living situations, if it were to happen, the ability would only lose effect until the people once more believed the amount is fair.
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Thanks for the recommendation; I'm using the free version right now, but I'm not going to upgrade to premium; I just don't want to spend money on it.
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No, it's not. There's no specific reason; I just personally don't like the notion of harems and don't want them to become a prominent part of the story, nor believe they would help the story in any way.
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The next level up will only be 1K, but that's because the only real reason as to why Arsenio's skill is working so well is because the people he is talking to are not trying to hide much from him, and if they did try to hide their intentions, the skill wouldn't be of much help, for now, that is.
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That's true, but to my knowledge, highly populated cities were very hard to find before the Industrial Revolution, and numbers like 100 were considered reasonably significant for the time.
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