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Thanks for the chapter. I think that the MC needs to learn how to control her powers especially her cold aura since with how it is now it can't do much. I mean she has ice power and she knows but she just circulates it with the technique and that is it she doesn't try to move her power or manifest it so she can cool herself better, from what I read her power is constantly coming out from her body not all of it, but a small amount that escapes from the circulation technique creating that cold aura, meaning that if she thinks about it she can try to condense it on just her skin to maximise the aura effects limiting the heat that she feels.

I pray to Arceus that the MC doesn't lock her up to make sure she is only hers

thanks for the chapter, a very good story different from the rest that just put themselves in the Pokémon world with plot armour everywhere. Instead this story shows struggles to get her rewards (and those rewards aren't op as hell) giving it life that other stories lack. Hope you continue this story even if you get few readers and power stones because every story needs to get a proper end.

thanks for the chapter, one question is the MC a meat head? because in every film or novel that the MC can see and read the villains do this and he knows about the wagon and the accomplishes so the Mc could have asked for a second squad to take the wagon or to take enough guards to surround the house. If you wanted his to escape you could make his a low leveled earth mage that took time to build a tunnel as a secret escape in case he got caught scamming.

thanks for the chapter, from what I am reading you are making the story slowly focusing more on character development instead of the surroundings.

thanks for the chapter, The only problem is that it's very short you can read the chapter in one minute making it very unsatisfying to read since the entire chapter can be summarised in 3 sentences *the MC's party got into the town, the party they punished is trying to make trouble, the passengers pay for the transport.* I mean other stories do similar things but they try to take the reader's mind elsewhere like in the part with the party offended by the MC you can write a description of why they have such pride like do they come from important families like minor nobles or knights.

thanks for the chapter, from what i am reading the chapters are lacking a flow, I Mean it's like someone decides to take pictures of the river instead of making a video. if it's possible can you try to making the chapter more fluid since it seems like someone wrote a part of the chapter stopped then jumped to another part of the same chapter.

thanks for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter, finally I can see what the MC is thinking thank you.

thanks for the chapter, in the latest chapters I see that they are more boring because it's all in third person making all the characters their personality making them like some side-character. If making daily chapters makes you write like that then it's better if you stop for a day or two to read all the previous ones and compare it to other stories. Then you can start to write a chapter every 2 days since most people upload 3 chapters a week.