If may say you use commas’ a lot.You can use simple sentences
"Just a little more…" he told himself, trying to muster the last drops of energy. With a sigh, he pushed the door open and entered. Unknowingly, as he reached his dormitory door and stepped inside, he was heading towards a destiny that would change his life forever.
DC: BY NIGHT ONE WAY, BY DAY ANOTHER(Young Justice SI-Atlante)(Shazam)
Anime & Comics · Adam007
I gasped for air as I shot up from the hard ground I was lying on. My long black hair was tied back behind my head and my bloodshot grey eyes looked around wildly. Seeing my surroundings, I realized I was in an alleyway.
Marvel's Osmosian
Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie
A lady petting a cat can be a fixxed point in time of the right conditions are met
(This is my explanation for why TFD doesn't just go searching for the Anti-Life equation himself. As for the theory that his true form is too powerful to accommodate his presence and the multiverse would shatter.... I call bullshit. In the comics, Darkseid fought with Zeus on earth and defeated the latter. Unless someone is going to prove otherwise, I refuse to believe that that was also an Avatar so I'd rather use a more rational explanation)
I Am Energy In Dc
Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours
Still nothing
Often? Try always
"Free stuff is always the best!"
The Magnet King of the Hyuga Family
Anime & Comics · Utkarsh_Satish13
Body weigh exercises
So, every night, he followed a strict fitness regimen, utilizing all the techniques he'd learned from prison fitness books in his previous life.
The Magnet King of the Hyuga Family
Anime & Comics · Utkarsh_Satish13
Piercing through its skull was the body of a gun, below which was a grotesque mouth full of teeth resembling knives. Its hands were rifles and machine guns, its chest was strong and broad with bones protruding outward, and instead of legs, it had bullet belts swaying in the wind.
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Piercing through its skull was the body of a gun, below which was a grotesque mouth full of teeth resembling knives. Its hands were rifles and machine guns, its chest was strong and broad with bones protruding outward, and instead of legs, it had bullet belts swaying in the wind.
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
That how hell works Alastair shot because he look like a deer to a hunter
"So, you resorted to abduction, Mr. Hammerstein?" she said, her voice calm but edged with irritation. "I expected more creativity from Hell's most notorious loan shark."
Hellfox in Hazbin
Anime & Comics · samadomkv
If I
"Just a little more…" he told himself, trying to muster the last drops of energy. With a sigh, he pushed the door open and entered. Unknowingly, as he reached his dormitory door and stepped inside, he was heading towards a destiny that would change his life forever.
DC: BY NIGHT ONE WAY, BY DAY ANOTHER(Young Justice SI-Atlante)(Shazam)
Anime & Comics · Adam007