The5CornerofSuprem

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
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One of the best web novels I've seen on this site. If you can, please add imperial units in a bracket, too tiring to check them each and every time. Other than that; Writing Quality: Need a little fixing but it is understandable and clear. It is better than most. I can vouch for it. Stability of Updates: No need to say anything on this one. Story Development: So far, amazing! I am eager to kidnap the author to force him to write more, so yeah. Character Desing: Splendid. There are tons of characters, each of them unique and their relations are well designed. My only concern is for the author to forget a few among too many. I hope the author can use all of them accordingly. World Background: Sounds generic at first, but it gets much better as one reads. There is an overused base there, but the author constructed the building amazingly. Thanks for the good novel, please do not drop!

The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

82 mhp

The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

249 mhp

"A hundred millions UD." The guy said and took out an ivory orb. "It is a high-tier Albino Elephant Orb. Has a rare speed element, and can go up to 400 km/h. Its defense is adequate, and can take hits from high-tier monsters. Because it is not a Psychic element, you have to drive manually, or you can let your AI drive it. There is a special bumper that can crush the obstacles in your way."

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

50 mhp

Miles arrived at the cave after half a day of running. With his speed close to 50 km/h, it was a long way to go. Luckily after taking the second serum, his endurance soared. Let aside half a day, even running a full day without resting, wouldn't tire him too much.

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

27-31 mhp

The optimum speed he could run for long distances was 45 to 50 km.

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

10.000 meters = 6.2 miles

"Why not fly over it?" Miles questioned with a 'duh' expression. "Tens of thousands meters is tall, but we can create crafts that can leap over it right?"

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

1000 meters = 3280 feet

In the video, a silhouette of a human standing on a flying bird could be seen. Man was standing thousands of meters in the air. He wasn't that far from the endless mountain, but he wasn't that high so the fog wasn't blocking the view. Then the human pulled out a paper plane and threw it towards the mountain.

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

45 mph

His highest speed was 73 kilometers per hour, which was a little bit faster than normal speed.

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

45 km/h = 28 mhp 70 km/h = 43 mhp A short km = 0.6 miles = 3168 Feet

Before the monster invasion, a person could run up to 45 kilometers in an hour. A person with the first Serum could run as fast as 70 kilometers in an hour. That was the highest speed in a short distance. Even with his physique Miles could only keep that speed for a short kilometer, then he would slow down by half.

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The5CornerofSuprem
The5CornerofSuprem
3 years ago
Commented

328 feet

Miles looked at the number with a conceited look and moved to the next room. It was time for a speed test. He looked at the number with many intervals. At each interval, there was a device measuring the speed. The peak speed in a 100-meter run would be considered the highest and would be recorded.

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