ah tips you say? you are welcome to share your opinions in the book review or comment section. however I do not mind looking into your offer and will respond when I am able
Спасибо за комплимент и за прочтение! Для ответа я использую переводчик, поэтому прошу прощения за возможные ошибки, но также спасибо за комментарии!
mood. but understandable
For the first time in a long time, I felt at peace…I didn't have to think about anything. This feeling stayed for a good five minutes before I got bored.
Fantasy · JALLEN
... something, everything is wrong.
Truly identical, even the angle at which the corners of their mouths curled was exactly the same.
Games · I Fix Air-Conditioner
Apologies for the late response Thank you so much for reading! I have many social media but my most active ones aside from discord are my Tumblr and Twitter The Tumblr handle for this story is @the11starsshinebright My Twitter (although not organized) is @circus_dececember.
hold up what
Once the assistant was gone, Aiden closed his eyes and leaned back in his chair. His mind drifted back to the first time he had caught a glimpse of his now wife. To look up Serena's past and her claims that the greedy couple was not her parents, Aiden had a way Sidney Price was the key. Of course, he wouldn't do that, though. After all, Sidney Price was his most cherished enemy. The one man whom he hated with a passion...While Serena Dawn, his newly awakened wife, was the woman Sidney Price loved.
Urban · har_k
my deepest apologies for not replying right away, thank you for taking time to read this book. Your insight is valued and I hope I improve with future chapters.
Este livro foi excluído.
A genuinely interesting story. Though I only read two chapters, the characters and plot are interesting and the writing style is good. There is an occasional minor spelling error but that's rare. I'm curious about the future chapters and it mixes comedy really well.
To start with, the story IS interesting it's just not a genre I have a real interest in. But in the end the world building is intriguing, if not as detailed as I would like to be able to grasp everything happening. Another negative point is the grammar and spelling. The spelling errors aren't too many to become annoying but there are moments where it's off putting. The same with that last paragraph at the end of the first chapter which is odd and doesn't fit with the start of the story. In addition while It's not a big thing, but the "add to Library" thing at the end of each chapter is also off-putting and normally the recurring request wouldn't be the problem, but it's not put with the author notes/thought so I was admittedly confused at it's appearance at the end of the chapters the first few times. The story is interesting and otherwise well written save for some description details. but has a few of drawbacks that may need to be double checked.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review! The feedback is appreciated
"No One Signed Up to be a Hero"
Fantasy · CrumblingTower000