Zestia_Einsbern

Zestia_Einsbern

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A newbie in writing.

2021-07-09 Unido Global
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Zestia_Einsbern
Zestia_Einsbern
10 hours ago
Replied to matrioxor

then that means you missed it, dylan made the new pokedex rotom himself, and his rotom has exclusive data available just for him and his close family

'Beep~ Necrozma (Dawn Wings), Psychic/Ghost-type, Prism Pokémon

Pokemon: Gym Leader

Pokemon: Gym Leader

Anime & Comics · RockyRoad891

Zestia_Einsbern
Zestia_Einsbern
2 days ago
Replied to Gon_6888

Sorry then XD, glad you're okay. I had a friend who chose suicide because excessive fear a few years ago and it left a bit trauma, since then I started to help anyone with mental problems, anyway keep up the good work and thankyou for the hard work. There are not many writers who fixed early chapters like you so I appreciate the effort

Zestia_Einsbern
Zestia_Einsbern
2 days ago
Replied to Gon_6888

all of them, the words placement in the sentences weren't coherent, i couldn't even tell whose talking and whose thoughts in several dialogues which very confusing, I mean it's MTL, what do you expect? and I tried to find my previous comment but it was gone, now I know how you maintain your good reviews, well you simply deleted all the bad reviews and comments. If you're so scared of bad reviews then you won't grow at all both as a writer and as a person, just saying. i mean bad reviews exist because it shows that the writer is lacking something which they need to fix, but deleting them is just a dumb way of avoiding it. scared of bad reviews on a translation by using MTL was even a red flag, it's not even your own original works. you should check your mental state with your friends or go see a psychiatrist if this fear effects you in real life. It's just an advice from a random person, it's up to you whether you want to read it or not, anyway keep up the good work and try to get better

Zestia_Einsbern
Zestia_Einsbern
3 days ago
Replied to iLeech

i don't know how this book got high reviews with this bad translation, I can't even understand what's going on anymore

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Zestia_Einsbern
3 days ago
Replied to EroNovel25

did your book got deleted by WN? or did you delete it yourself?

Este livro foi excluído.
Zestia_Einsbern
Zestia_Einsbern
4 days ago
Replied to Fruce

well if it only one or two pics then that's normal, but imagine having the whole walls filled with your photos, some perhaos taken by secretly. then the bed sheet have your face on it, there stuffed animals with your photos on it, the pillows, the desk, chair, everythint in your favorite colors. if you search enough you could even find things like straws you used before or some things you have threw away, do you still find it hot? for me I would find it disturbing a lot, red flag yes, disgusted yes, but since in this situation I'm a friend, I would still becareful with my words

"Just...just shut up!" Rhea clasped her hand before her face and begged him to close his mouth. Her voice was hoarse since she barely prevented herself from vomiting just now.

Crushing flags and claiming the Villainess

Crushing flags and claiming the Villainess

Fantasy · RashCore

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Zestia_Einsbern
4 days ago
Replied to Kary_KD

it's not the same, luffy granpa is garp, his father is dragon. Even if luffy left his enemies alive, there will be 0 chance for them to hurt his family for revenge, I mean that's no other than suicide XD, unlike most protags who have a 'mother' or a 'lil sis' to protect but to kind to finish off their enemies, example? peter parkweeer XD

The protagonist is a trouble magnet and the type of girl who leaves her opponent alive, just because everyone deserves a second chance kind of sh*t.

Crushing flags and claiming the Villainess

Crushing flags and claiming the Villainess

Fantasy · RashCore

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Zestia_Einsbern
5 days ago
Commented

merry Christmas

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Zestia_Einsbern
5 days ago
Commented

Merry Christmas

Chapter 145: Being a bit too cryptic

Pokemon: Gym Leader

Pokemon: Gym Leader

Anime & Comics · RockyRoad891

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Zestia_Einsbern
5 days ago
Commented

MERRY CHRISTMAS

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    25 Chs 991 Coleções

  • One Piece, Ahoy! original

    One Piece, Ahoy!

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    0 Chs 27 Coleções