Zero_O

Zero_O

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Just living in the craft and the crafter…

2021-07-06 Unido Global
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Zero_O
Zero_O
2 years ago
Posted

The story got me really hooked, its really funny and interesting. MC as well as the other characters are really likable. Negatives- Grammar, and the description gets short. -------------------------------- I really feel your story has a great potential, grammar and good descriptions are something that could get better with practice. I am really looking forward for your future work. -----KEEP WRITING----

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Zero_O
Zero_O
2 years ago
Commented

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"Mmm, it seems that the two of them know each other ... Could this girl be able to get Rodrigo join the group again? As a tutor, I have a duty to make sure that none of my students have a bad time in their golden years, if Caroline can to ensure that Rodrigo does not finish like me then I have to help them" -the tutor thought seriously- "Because if I don't, Rodrigo will end up like me, single, without friends or couple at 35, with a teacher's salary that is not enough to give you luxuries, I can barely pay the rent, and I'm so alone, nobody comes close to me, and none of my coworkers has invited me to eat, my mother told me that I was beautiful, why did I reject everyone in high school?, now nobody pays attention to me "-The tutor thought sadly and quickly, who is interrupted by Caroline upon seeing her with a strange face-

The hero of the 8 sacred swords

The hero of the 8 sacred swords

Fantasy · Swords_Sensei

Zero_O
Zero_O
2 years ago
Commented

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"Well, well, it seems that the Mr. Pervert is also pervert with other women that are not Alice" -said Ana, annoying Rodrigo-

The hero of the 8 sacred swords

The hero of the 8 sacred swords

Fantasy · Swords_Sensei

Zero_O
Zero_O
2 years ago
Posted

The writing style of the author is just beautiful and the detailed description clearly show how strong a command the author has over the language. This piece 'shows' you the story rather than 'tell'. The plot is really intriguing and the touch of mystery only makes it better. Just loved it.

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Zero_O
2 years ago
Replied to The_Procrastinator

You really give op reviews 😂😂

Zero_O
Zero_O
3 years ago
Replied to Ashking

Thank you 😁😁

Zero_O
Zero_O
3 years ago
Replied to Arise9

I will try writing regularly, thanks for your patience.

Zero_O
Zero_O
3 years ago
Replied to Luca_dari

😄😄

Zero_O
Zero_O
3 years ago
Replied to Sensei_Gen

😅😅🤭🤭

Zero_O
Zero_O
3 years ago
Replied to Vizard0

Thank you...

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