i was just busy fixing my car lol
thanks for the chapter author-nim, hope you are doing better now
it's ok author nim just take your time and recover
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ART Of Survival
Fantasy · KimChangMin
yoooo he finally got an op ability
I don't know but this is one of my first novels and I love the world building and plot but I feel as if the main character is slightly cringy but that just adds to the charm of it.
thanks for the chapter author-nim!!
I really like the story!! thanks for the chapter author-nim
it just might be the way the main character speaks so i might just be making assumptions lol
"I should probably start cleaning my place now," he said as he started moving towards the house picking up trash and cleaning his room. He was in the process of cleaning as he felt the ground shake. He just brushed it off as he thought of it being a normal earthquake, but, after some time the ground started shaking again but this time it was not a normal earthquake. this time the earthquake instead of dying down was getting more and more vigorous. Mal's (Auth:- I will call him Mal, The meaning of his name is Persisting till the end = Mal-Chin) face turned white as various thoughts surfaced in his mind. "What if I die here," "After 10 years would I not be able to see the outside world?" "I am just 19 and virgin, I cannot die just yet," (Auth:- Woah buddy calm down 'Chotto matte').
ART Of Survival
Fantasy · KimChangMin
when characters speak it's better for them to use the shortened versions of verbs. like "I'm" instead of "I am" and "can't" instead of "cannot" the latter versions are too stiff and formal it's better used for narration and not for character speech. [img=recommend]
"I should probably start cleaning my place now," he said as he started moving towards the house picking up trash and cleaning his room. He was in the process of cleaning as he felt the ground shake. He just brushed it off as he thought of it being a normal earthquake, but, after some time the ground started shaking again but this time it was not a normal earthquake. this time the earthquake instead of dying down was getting more and more vigorous. Mal's (Auth:- I will call him Mal, The meaning of his name is Persisting till the end = Mal-Chin) face turned white as various thoughts surfaced in his mind. "What if I die here," "After 10 years would I not be able to see the outside world?" "I am just 19 and virgin, I cannot die just yet," (Auth:- Woah buddy calm down 'Chotto matte').
ART Of Survival
Fantasy · KimChangMin
ty for the chapter!
ART Of Survival
Fantasy · KimChangMin