Raph_ael

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2021-06-09 Unido Qatar
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Raph_ael
Raph_ael
11 months ago
Posted

sooooooooo bad I think the author is a kid or around that. if not he probably has mental issues which I hope he can recover from. to understand the story you have to read his comments cuz otherwise there are holes in the plot for example in the early chapter I'm said that training for 1 min gave him 10 exp and to become *masterful* at a certain skill he has to accumulate 8500 that's like 14 hours but he training for days (not stated how many but days) and only becomes an apprentice which is like 5 or 4 steps away form master ful. and let's not talk about the humor that the mc/author has. he's name is bang just because and I quote "its funny imagine... lord bang hehehe god B.A.N.G hehehe XD xd" wtf is this??? one chapter hes in a delima do I drink the blood of human to survive or not he does after much hesitation but the next chapter he's joking about drinking human "juice" wtf man. if you want to read because you want to torture yourself go ahead other than that don't.

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
11 months ago
Replied to dmacrulz

I think the author is a kid or still in his emo period cuz that's his humor. He thinks that's funny

"Apprentice? Seriously? Are you pulling my wing here? I've been slogging away in this dark, gloomy pit for days, and all I get is an 'Apprentice' badge? Give me a break!" Bong's frustration was palpable as he ranted at the system's proficiency level alert, his bat-like expression resembling a mix of disbelief and annoyance.

I Reincarnated As An Immortal Bat Into Another World

I Reincarnated As An Immortal Bat Into Another World

Fantasy · Promezus

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
11 months ago
Replied to Promezus

how about using chat gbt to convey your thoughts next time cuz what you said and what u wrote have nothing in common.just use chat gbt man feed it your novel and make it into your own editor so you don't have to pay anyone a cut.

As he withdrew, his eyes were haunted by what he had done. He had taken a life, even if it was to save his own. The weight of his actions hung heavy on his conscience, but survival had prevailed over morality in that crucial moment.

I Reincarnated As An Immortal Bat Into Another World

I Reincarnated As An Immortal Bat Into Another World

Fantasy · Promezus

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
11 months ago
Commented

rewrites will make us wait even more 😩😭

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
1 years ago
Replied to Dao13ofbook

to them (the insects)

The insects, confused by my sudden intrusion, left me alone as they reluctantly approached the Mat'ahar, giving me the chance to get closer to them.

Necromancer's Evolutionary Traits

Necromancer's Evolutionary Traits

Action · DaoistuDBhcT

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
2 years ago
Commented

this shit should get more recognition man y aren't more ppl reading this

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
2 years ago
Replied to VividlyLucid29

yea since when does being half beast help with aura? aura is humans specialty not beasts he's at a disadvantage if anything the physique thing might pass but not enough info is available to judge

After all, even if they were fictional, the authors and creators tended to put a lot of time into working out the practicality of attacks so their readers wouldn't complain about it being too unrealistic.

Void Evolution System

Void Evolution System

Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
2 years ago
Commented

well deserved pat tbh, if I could I would too

[[Author : See how far I had planned even a year and a half ago when I started this novel? This is how you connect all dots in a homogeneous world-building. *pats myself on the shoulder shamelessly*]] 

Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
2 years ago
Replied to Firecat22

99 with the captain or Mc

Raph_ael
Raph_ael
2 years ago
Replied to Eric_Fanguy

or maybe he's Edward

One day, the Nine Guardians found themselves engaged in a great battle against two of the Five Calamities. Valok, the Demon God of the Abyss, and Ramauris, the Demon God of the Undead.

Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?

Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?

Fantasy · Darksky_ll